for A Return to Normalcy1/2/2020 c2 Guest
Whoaaaaaaaaaa! This is awesommmmme! Like, super amazing. I love it. You’re an amazing writer. Great job. This is the first FanFic of yours that I’ve read, and it’s definitely one of the best I’ve read.
Whoaaaaaaaaaa! This is awesommmmme! Like, super amazing. I love it. You’re an amazing writer. Great job. This is the first FanFic of yours that I’ve read, and it’s definitely one of the best I’ve read.
10/30/2016 c1 Sandy
Hi !
Thank you very much for this part of the story. I like how you fly smoothly from present to past : it's a very successful non-chronological chapter. Also, the repetition of the names and the focus on Amy's feelings gives a good impression of her stage of mind. She is looking at people coming and going in her life and trying to understand her own feelings but they are so overwhelming that the actual actions are in the background. I'll jump strait away into an other of your stories.
Enjoy your day ! Sandy
Hi !
Thank you very much for this part of the story. I like how you fly smoothly from present to past : it's a very successful non-chronological chapter. Also, the repetition of the names and the focus on Amy's feelings gives a good impression of her stage of mind. She is looking at people coming and going in her life and trying to understand her own feelings but they are so overwhelming that the actual actions are in the background. I'll jump strait away into an other of your stories.
Enjoy your day ! Sandy