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12/15/2014 c3 shugokage
Definitely an interesting story idea good luck!
12/15/2014 c3 3shadespace
great chapter, interesting development with neji although i'm scared of what hinata and sakura's reactions will be lol
12/13/2014 c3 Guest
very good, loved
12/13/2014 c3 SPark681
Great that bastard Danzo is up to no good once again wish he'd just die already anyways keep up the great work!
12/13/2014 c3 1Indecisive Bob
Nice chapter! And oh dear. Sakura is quite a volatile character, and Illyana won't tolerate another girl being possessive/borderline-abusive of her boyfriend. That encounter has the potential to get a bit messy. And Danzo! What a little poophead. With him involved, it's almost guaranteed that Illyana will get kidnapped at some point. Though how they plan on keeping her in one place is beyond me. Restraining seals? Though with Illyana almost guaranteed to be kidnapped, it's almost guaranteed that a can of whoop-ass is going to be collectively opened on them at some point by both Naruto and Illyana. Keep up the good work!
12/13/2014 c3 2hollowichigo12
Good chapter. I loved how Naruto and Illyana were having sex and they did not even notice an Anbu standing in the same room as them. The landlady scene was funny and I look forward to seeing more scenes like that in the future. I look forward to seeing Sakura and Illyana meeting each other and if they fight. Danzo will be royally fucked if he hurts Illyana in anyway. Will you bring in any of the X-men in this story because I can just see how Colossus would react to reading the porn book that based on Naruto and Illyana and trying to rip Naruto apart when he learns that Naruto and Illyana have had sex multiple times and have been dating for a while now
12/13/2014 c3 2FinalKingdomHearts
Not bad.
12/11/2014 c2 Guest
very good ,loved
12/9/2014 c2 3shadespace
i can't wait for all the reactions in konoha. hopefully danzo don't make naruto kill him
12/8/2014 c2 1Indecisive Bob
I'm liking this story so far! I'm not much of a comic person, so I had no idea who Magik was until I looked her up on Google. She and Naruto are certainly two peas in a pod with their terrible childhoods and unwanted demonic burdens. I'm kind of disappointed that this is just a back-burner story since I really like what you've written so far. Keep up the good work!
12/8/2014 c2 6Vizard890
Does Neji have a crush on Illyana? And then there's Sakura... that's going to be fun.
12/6/2014 c2 Iceflame55
Another potential Harem? I'm going to HAVE to bookmark your Author page to begin regular checks!
12/4/2014 c2 2FinalKingdomHearts
12/4/2014 c2 2hollowichigo12
I loved this chapter and I really like the pairing. The fight scenes were well written and I look forward to seeing what Naruto and Illyana have planned for Jiraiya.
12/4/2014 c2 9YubelHaouJudai
pls update quickly!
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