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5/29/2020 c6 Little Miss Janie
This was lovely! You wrote the progression of their relationship wonderfully. Thanks for sharing!
8/19/2017 c6 Guest
well done. deep down i knew they were right for each, but you made it more ''more story book''
and enjoyable.
8/18/2017 c4 Guest
so glad laura was gone, eva was no better.
8/18/2017 c3 Guest
maybe everything just went too fast for her.
8/18/2017 c1 Guest
not at all what i expected but certainly enjoyable. continue.
12/15/2016 c6 Guest
enjoy the story.
12/14/2016 c5 Guest
good so far, but i'm coming away thinking della is a tramp.
12/11/2016 c1 Guest
SURPRISED ME.
10/7/2016 c6 Guest
good job. i like it.
7/16/2016 c6 dellawannabe
Well done. Captures their personalities, their complementarity. Paul was dead on. Loved it.
7/1/2016 c6 49RBHDPSMMK4EVER
I LOVE,LOVE, LOVE, this story
6/27/2016 c1 pj
I keep coming back to this - what could be better than Perry and Della being randy - and then falling in love? Kudos for a great and unexpected story.
1/1/2016 c6 3Margaret Henson
Beautiful! Love all the spicy bits!
1/1/2016 c5 Margaret Henson
Love your expressions! "Poke the beast" "slap and tickle". Well played, Paul! Make Perry rat himself out.
1/1/2016 c2 Margaret Henson
Love the restaurant scene! They're so awkward!
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