for Beginnings5/29/2020 c6 Little Miss Janie
This was lovely! You wrote the progression of their relationship wonderfully. Thanks for sharing!
This was lovely! You wrote the progression of their relationship wonderfully. Thanks for sharing!
8/19/2017 c6 Guest
well done. deep down i knew they were right for each, but you made it more ''more story book''
and enjoyable.
well done. deep down i knew they were right for each, but you made it more ''more story book''
and enjoyable.
8/18/2017 c4 Guest
so glad laura was gone, eva was no better.
so glad laura was gone, eva was no better.
8/18/2017 c3 Guest
maybe everything just went too fast for her.
maybe everything just went too fast for her.
8/18/2017 c1 Guest
not at all what i expected but certainly enjoyable. continue.
not at all what i expected but certainly enjoyable. continue.
12/15/2016 c6 Guest
enjoy the story.
enjoy the story.
12/14/2016 c5 Guest
good so far, but i'm coming away thinking della is a tramp.
good so far, but i'm coming away thinking della is a tramp.
12/11/2016 c1 Guest
SURPRISED ME.
SURPRISED ME.
10/7/2016 c6 Guest
good job. i like it.
good job. i like it.
7/16/2016 c6 dellawannabe
Well done. Captures their personalities, their complementarity. Paul was dead on. Loved it.
Well done. Captures their personalities, their complementarity. Paul was dead on. Loved it.
496/27/2016 c1 pj
I keep coming back to this - what could be better than Perry and Della being randy - and then falling in love? Kudos for a great and unexpected story.
I keep coming back to this - what could be better than Perry and Della being randy - and then falling in love? Kudos for a great and unexpected story.
1/1/2016 c5 Margaret Henson
Love your expressions! "Poke the beast" "slap and tickle". Well played, Paul! Make Perry rat himself out.
Love your expressions! "Poke the beast" "slap and tickle". Well played, Paul! Make Perry rat himself out.