for Gratsu Spell6/14/2020 c1 Yeee
Why the hell am I smiling?! The end made me smile! No complaints here.
Why the hell am I smiling?! The end made me smile! No complaints here.
5/22/2017 c1 Swagachu
(1)you spelled Gray's name wrong
(2)you spelled a lot of words wrong
(3)great fanfic
(1)you spelled Gray's name wrong
(2)you spelled a lot of words wrong
(3)great fanfic
12/13/2015 c1 Guest
That was cute.
That was cute.
4/3/2015 c1 Guest
Really? Butt plug?
Really? Butt plug?
2/9/2015 c1 
1TeenRebellion
Try having them in a school and falling in as the seme Natsu as the please check your writing after you are done. Thanks
1TeenRebellionTry having them in a school and falling in as the seme Natsu as the please check your writing after you are done. Thanks
12/24/2014 c1 Winter and Spring
Think you could have them go on a mission to look after a baby that appared at the guid and the baby only like Natsu so he looks after him. Natsu would be more mother like. But they both love each other and they can't say it to the other. Gray would get jeous over how much time Natsu was spending with the baby and confess to Natsu. No one comes for the baby and Natsu and Gray takes care of him.
Think you could have them go on a mission to look after a baby that appared at the guid and the baby only like Natsu so he looks after him. Natsu would be more mother like. But they both love each other and they can't say it to the other. Gray would get jeous over how much time Natsu was spending with the baby and confess to Natsu. No one comes for the baby and Natsu and Gray takes care of him.
12/10/2014 c1 NaruHa
love i totally shipp them they make the funnist and cutest pair 3 … thank you so much for writing this …great work loved all the details… hope to see more from you and on them ….. 3
love i totally shipp them they make the funnist and cutest pair 3 … thank you so much for writing this …great work loved all the details… hope to see more from you and on them ….. 3
12/5/2014 c1 1Puck R Goodfellow
I really liked it! I recently started watching fairy take and this was literally my first fan fiction in the fandom XD of course it was a smutty one hehehe I loved the detail you did with it and suggestions would be hmm maybe one where they are normal high schoolers?or shota? Idk I think that would really give you a different look in the two and a nice little challenge :) Good job!
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1Puck R GoodfellowI really liked it! I recently started watching fairy take and this was literally my first fan fiction in the fandom XD of course it was a smutty one hehehe I loved the detail you did with it and suggestions would be hmm maybe one where they are normal high schoolers?or shota? Idk I think that would really give you a different look in the two and a nice little challenge :) Good job!
[]*Mr robot sends a A star