for Young Justice: The Hunter12/15/2014 c1 Guest
I do hope that you continue this fine work of fan-made crossover literature, but I do wonder, what elements of the Crysis universe will you implement aside from a kick-ass summary and very fitting cover art? I see some incredible possibilities for your story, shame that people don't do more Crysis crossovers as it can fit into just about any story, loved the "muder-boner" joke by the way, seems exactly like what a psycho teen would write during a epidemic like yours. Keep up the fantastic work
I do hope that you continue this fine work of fan-made crossover literature, but I do wonder, what elements of the Crysis universe will you implement aside from a kick-ass summary and very fitting cover art? I see some incredible possibilities for your story, shame that people don't do more Crysis crossovers as it can fit into just about any story, loved the "muder-boner" joke by the way, seems exactly like what a psycho teen would write during a epidemic like yours. Keep up the fantastic work
12/13/2014 c3 Cf96
Sweet work
Sweet work
12/10/2014 c2 Kaioo
You missed a very good note on Flash. Admittedly it's main universe Flash not YJ Flash. If he could be bothered, the Flash could get rid of ALL CRIME in the world with ease, due to his documented speed.
You missed a very good note on Flash. Admittedly it's main universe Flash not YJ Flash. If he could be bothered, the Flash could get rid of ALL CRIME in the world with ease, due to his documented speed.
12/10/2014 c3 unknown eragon
U have some NERVE to publish a new fic when u have others to finish dipshit!
U have some NERVE to publish a new fic when u have others to finish dipshit!
12/7/2014 c3 StrayTitan
Good chapter, it flows like what you would honestly expect to happen. Virgil is definitely beating the odds by surviving though, doubly so against both infected and Blackwatch. Have you decided a definite timeline for when the infection ends or some of the main events (like the Whitelight announcements and distribution or the final battle)? All I've found is that the entire game takes place in 2010 from July 4th onwards, so I'm interested as to how much you want to spread out the events that have to happen and Virgil's development (or mental deterioration) during that time. This is an interesting premise, so I hope to see the next chapter somewhat soon.
Good chapter, it flows like what you would honestly expect to happen. Virgil is definitely beating the odds by surviving though, doubly so against both infected and Blackwatch. Have you decided a definite timeline for when the infection ends or some of the main events (like the Whitelight announcements and distribution or the final battle)? All I've found is that the entire game takes place in 2010 from July 4th onwards, so I'm interested as to how much you want to spread out the events that have to happen and Virgil's development (or mental deterioration) during that time. This is an interesting premise, so I hope to see the next chapter somewhat soon.
12/7/2014 c3 pyrojack25
Never thought you'd compare him to Raiden or Punisher, but hey your story, not mine. ;)
Never thought you'd compare him to Raiden or Punisher, but hey your story, not mine. ;)
12/7/2014 c3 
1Infinite Freedom
It's interesting to see Virgil's mind as New York goes to hell. And how it's changing him.
1Infinite FreedomIt's interesting to see Virgil's mind as New York goes to hell. And how it's changing him.
11/30/2014 c2 Gillespie
This story is interesting and I can't wait to see as it progresses
This story is interesting and I can't wait to see as it progresses
11/27/2014 c1 pyrojack25
Damn it I knew it, I knew Ventis and Raven would have a son. (not really) ;)
Damn it I knew it, I knew Ventis and Raven would have a son. (not really) ;)
11/27/2014 c1 guisniperman
Well, it's quite the interesting setup. Imaginative way to reveal all of your oc history.
Well, it's quite the interesting setup. Imaginative way to reveal all of your oc history.