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4/14/2017 c2 Liberty Cox
It is pretty good just add some more romance in it
2/21/2015 c2 6theWeekendSquared
I've been in that boat before... Not knowing where a story's going to go is frustrating sometimes :) However your story's really good and I'm eager to see where you can take it! As for a suggestion... You could show the developing relationships between the different flock members. I for one am really interested in learning more about your OC's. Where are they from? What are their powers? Things like that... And once you start making up back stories for your characters I'm sure you'll find a good plot point to continue the story on.

It's really good so far and I'd love to see more!
12/4/2014 c1 LeapLikeTheDawn
I'd like to see more, but its very good. Also thanks for reviewing mine!
11/28/2014 c1 monkeygirl1425
Like so far waiting to see what happens!
11/28/2014 c1 Guest
Please write more of this story soon, it is really good!

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