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7/26/2016 c1 2The Anime Loving Girl
THE FEELS
4/13/2016 c1 guest
Do you even know the English language? Seems not.
12/7/2014 c1 4blue.bitter.rabbit
Sniff sniff. WHHHYYYYYY?!

The only small thing I'd say though, is the stuttering was just a bit too much, other than that, great!
11/29/2014 c1 Guest
Hey man! First off id like to tell you that i dont hate you, secondly its a nice deathfic :D and thirdly (please dont hate me) i kind of liked the the idea of ed dying... god that came out wrong... what i mean is you bearly see it in other stories and for it to be in battle just seems realistic to me, plus it seemed sadder. Oh and also i liked how they talked about human transmutation.
11/30/2014 c1 46Gamma Cavy
first, work on your spelling, second, work on your punctuation.
11/29/2014 c1 93Number Eleven is my OC
Good job! You are good at this! Just a word of advice, not as much stuttering and you will be perfect!
11/28/2014 c1 timetoletgo
WHAT IS THIS

NO

NO

NO

I'M CRYING
NO SOBBING

WOW

THIS TO MY FEELS IS THE EQUIVALENT TO KICKING A GUY IN THAT AREA

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