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7/22/2017 c6 Guest
It was awsome saws
3/13/2016 c12 Blood moon
You need to learn how to write it was a good story but still you need to learn how to write
8/3/2015 c2 Mnglonfunnf
8/3/2015 c1 Mnglonfunnf
6/30/2015 c2 javabands
Okay I'm sorry but it's really irritating, please fix your grammar and punctuation. It's a really great story, so when you get the chance you should fix that.
5/10/2015 c7 PlaidOtaku
Oh and some punctuation marks to show the ending of a sentence. Not to be mean but it sorta makes it hard to discern one sentence from the next.
5/10/2015 c6 PlaidOtaku
It's a good story but a little confusing with the conversation blending and half-bolded words. Quotation marks would be great.
3/14/2015 c19 46Mysterie1985
*watches the scene from behind a tree with a soft smile, eyes bright with determination; murmurs* well done... but even a Guardian can sometimes need a guardian...
3/14/2015 c18 Mysterie1985
oh lord... Joker reference... XD

nice chapter though. can't wait to see what happens with the sequel. although I'm not sure this title makes sense...
3/13/2015 c17 Mysterie1985
oh no dark frost... this isn't the end... there are too many who will fight for Jack! I'm with you Jack, all the way.

*punches dark frost pretty hard, not afraid of the cold*
3/13/2015 c17 theawsomest5
3/9/2015 c16 theawsomest5
Keep going it was just getting interesting!
3/8/2015 c16 Mysterie1985
wow...poor Jack... [beast mode moments? I donno about that for ours... seeing as Jack doesn't actually transform; he's just lashing out... hmmm I want to say maybe just "Dark Jack" moments... but that's too obvious and needs a better name. he's not evil per say... so not evil and black might make people think of BlackIce instead of what we really mean... Shadow moments maybe? I donno... if you come up with something better be sure to let me know]
3/7/2015 c16 Laybay
3/3/2015 c15 Mysterie1985
oh man... figures DJ would cause Jack to lose his memories... this is gonna get ugly and FAST...

very nice though :)
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