for Dark side of Frost7/22/2017 c6 Guest
It was awsome saws
It was awsome saws
3/13/2016 c12 Blood moon
You need to learn how to write it was a good story but still you need to learn how to write
You need to learn how to write it was a good story but still you need to learn how to write
8/3/2015 c2 Mnglonfunnf
Wow
Wow
8/3/2015 c1 Mnglonfunnf
Intresting
Intresting
6/30/2015 c2 javabands
Okay I'm sorry but it's really irritating, please fix your grammar and punctuation. It's a really great story, so when you get the chance you should fix that.
Okay I'm sorry but it's really irritating, please fix your grammar and punctuation. It's a really great story, so when you get the chance you should fix that.
5/10/2015 c7 PlaidOtaku
Oh and some punctuation marks to show the ending of a sentence. Not to be mean but it sorta makes it hard to discern one sentence from the next.
Oh and some punctuation marks to show the ending of a sentence. Not to be mean but it sorta makes it hard to discern one sentence from the next.
5/10/2015 c6 PlaidOtaku
It's a good story but a little confusing with the conversation blending and half-bolded words. Quotation marks would be great.
It's a good story but a little confusing with the conversation blending and half-bolded words. Quotation marks would be great.
3/14/2015 c19 
46Mysterie1985
*watches the scene from behind a tree with a soft smile, eyes bright with determination; murmurs* well done... but even a Guardian can sometimes need a guardian...
46Mysterie1985*watches the scene from behind a tree with a soft smile, eyes bright with determination; murmurs* well done... but even a Guardian can sometimes need a guardian...
3/14/2015 c18 Mysterie1985
oh lord... Joker reference... XD
nice chapter though. can't wait to see what happens with the sequel. although I'm not sure this title makes sense...
oh lord... Joker reference... XD
nice chapter though. can't wait to see what happens with the sequel. although I'm not sure this title makes sense...
3/13/2015 c17 Mysterie1985
oh no dark frost... this isn't the end... there are too many who will fight for Jack! I'm with you Jack, all the way.
*punches dark frost pretty hard, not afraid of the cold*
oh no dark frost... this isn't the end... there are too many who will fight for Jack! I'm with you Jack, all the way.
*punches dark frost pretty hard, not afraid of the cold*
3/8/2015 c16 Mysterie1985
wow...poor Jack... [beast mode moments? I donno about that for ours... seeing as Jack doesn't actually transform; he's just lashing out... hmmm I want to say maybe just "Dark Jack" moments... but that's too obvious and needs a better name. he's not evil per say... so not evil and black might make people think of BlackIce instead of what we really mean... Shadow moments maybe? I donno... if you come up with something better be sure to let me know]
wow...poor Jack... [beast mode moments? I donno about that for ours... seeing as Jack doesn't actually transform; he's just lashing out... hmmm I want to say maybe just "Dark Jack" moments... but that's too obvious and needs a better name. he's not evil per say... so not evil and black might make people think of BlackIce instead of what we really mean... Shadow moments maybe? I donno... if you come up with something better be sure to let me know]
3/3/2015 c15 Mysterie1985
oh man... figures DJ would cause Jack to lose his memories... this is gonna get ugly and FAST...
very nice though :)
oh man... figures DJ would cause Jack to lose his memories... this is gonna get ugly and FAST...
very nice though :)