
4/13/2020 c1 Kin
Nicee
Nicee
11/30/2014 c1 BelleArcher
The lemon wasn't bad and the dialogue was kind of cute but putting unnecessary things in parenthesis was distracting. Thanks for writing.
The lemon wasn't bad and the dialogue was kind of cute but putting unnecessary things in parenthesis was distracting. Thanks for writing.