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4/15/2015 c10 Elbow7
You poked my heart with this one. So sad but happy he got a proper send off with the love of his family. Excuse me while I rock back and forth and cry in the corner.
You poked my heart with this one. So sad but happy he got a proper send off with the love of his family. Excuse me while I rock back and forth and cry in the corner.
4/15/2015 c10 
6Shawn Raven
(Cries forlornly) SVEN!
WHY'D YOU HAD TO GO?! :(
Then again...Jaffa here really put some thought into making this part of the story so heartfelt. Anna indeed in particular knows what to do for Kristoff at such a despaired moment.
That new dog they're getting will never replace Sven...but then again that dog may just be enough to fit that gaping hole that's in their lives.
I said their lives, a huge emphasis on that alright!
6Shawn Raven(Cries forlornly) SVEN!
WHY'D YOU HAD TO GO?! :(
Then again...Jaffa here really put some thought into making this part of the story so heartfelt. Anna indeed in particular knows what to do for Kristoff at such a despaired moment.
That new dog they're getting will never replace Sven...but then again that dog may just be enough to fit that gaping hole that's in their lives.
I said their lives, a huge emphasis on that alright!
4/15/2015 c9 Shawn Raven
Sorry for not reviewing this chapter earlier...unfortunately I had forgotten to check on it after some rather debilitating events...
But honestly, wadafaq just happened?!
One should never play Truth Or Dare with Anna lest they wish to run naked all over the streets singing a drunk rendition of Let It Go, not that scenario actually happened...but he still ran out naked anyway. :)
And why not laugh at this sheer lunacy from start to finish? (Laughs gleefully)
Sorry for not reviewing this chapter earlier...unfortunately I had forgotten to check on it after some rather debilitating events...
But honestly, wadafaq just happened?!
One should never play Truth Or Dare with Anna lest they wish to run naked all over the streets singing a drunk rendition of Let It Go, not that scenario actually happened...but he still ran out naked anyway. :)
And why not laugh at this sheer lunacy from start to finish? (Laughs gleefully)
2/26/2015 c4 33hoarfrost-sn
Oh... gosh. I have tears in my eyes. I don't know why. I've always imagined Anna and Kristoff having a hard time saying I love you to each other, and this clearly hits it spot on. I love how Kristoff's always understanding to her, always puts her first. Gosh darn it. Stop making me feel all these fluffy feelings for them. It makes me love them too much!
33hoarfrost-snOh... gosh. I have tears in my eyes. I don't know why. I've always imagined Anna and Kristoff having a hard time saying I love you to each other, and this clearly hits it spot on. I love how Kristoff's always understanding to her, always puts her first. Gosh darn it. Stop making me feel all these fluffy feelings for them. It makes me love them too much!
2/25/2015 c9 Elbow7
Yaaayyy. What a great chapter! I lol'd a few times. Anna's such a trouble maker and poor Kristoff. I like to think they let him off with a stern warning after Anna showed up to explain. Or maybe they then arrest her for drinking! Ha. Hope you keep writing!
Yaaayyy. What a great chapter! I lol'd a few times. Anna's such a trouble maker and poor Kristoff. I like to think they let him off with a stern warning after Anna showed up to explain. Or maybe they then arrest her for drinking! Ha. Hope you keep writing!
2/25/2015 c9 19the archduke
Poor Kristoff, now I want to know what happens after he's released from jail (in my mind Elsa bails him out for some reason). Good stuff, looking forward to more. Maybe something with Olaf's librarian lady?
19the archdukePoor Kristoff, now I want to know what happens after he's released from jail (in my mind Elsa bails him out for some reason). Good stuff, looking forward to more. Maybe something with Olaf's librarian lady?
2/20/2015 c8 AncientJaguar
There were several points I enjoyed about your story. The relationship between Elsa and Anna were similar to the connection they had at the end of the movie. This was a great starting point for your story. Nic was sassy yet had a kind heart. I admired that. Being a big fan of England the fact that Nic is British was nice. I viewed your picture on Deviant Art showing everyone on the mountain. I was impressed with Olaf in human form. Also, Nic's image matches perfectly with your story. Are you planning more drawings? That would be nice.
May I suggest a POV I have not seen anywhere else? A concept/chapter where Elsa and Anna's parents meet Nic. She does not believe being gay is something you are born with. She took a course on evolution in college. Nic has a lot of questions. For example ,"Is homosexuality an chosen evolutionary dead end according to Darwin?"
There were several points I enjoyed about your story. The relationship between Elsa and Anna were similar to the connection they had at the end of the movie. This was a great starting point for your story. Nic was sassy yet had a kind heart. I admired that. Being a big fan of England the fact that Nic is British was nice. I viewed your picture on Deviant Art showing everyone on the mountain. I was impressed with Olaf in human form. Also, Nic's image matches perfectly with your story. Are you planning more drawings? That would be nice.
May I suggest a POV I have not seen anywhere else? A concept/chapter where Elsa and Anna's parents meet Nic. She does not believe being gay is something you are born with. She took a course on evolution in college. Nic has a lot of questions. For example ,"Is homosexuality an chosen evolutionary dead end according to Darwin?"
1/16/2015 c7 JB Harris
Hello there, so, I finished reading the main story the other day and I was going to post a review there but then I saw that you had this snippet-list and well... long story short I'm leaving it here.
I've got to say, this is one of the best Frozen stories I have ever come across. (Top five, definitely). The characterization is flawless, the unfolding of the story is wonderful and well-paced, the blooming romance is beautiful and you left me wanting much, MUCH more. I even loved your OC and I'm usually apprehensive about them! (I loved Nic, though not as much as Elsa, I'm sure).
I loved the perspective in this chapter, about how someone can get to such a dark place by refusing to move on and holding so much resentment inside. He might be a two-faced sunovafish but you made me feel sad for him. (you wrote him beautifully! The pinnacle of static characterization, one character that stays the same by refusing to be dynamic!).
I know Hans is supposed to be the 'bad guy' but, could you also show something good about him? Something that makes me go all, "ohhh, look, he IS human. An unhealthily angry one but still deliciously grey". Doesn't necessarily have to be about redeeming the character but about fleshing him out.
Hey, if you're low on ideas, might I suggest some? (Feel free to skip) Like, how about showing us how Elsa and Anna met Olaf? Or what (exactly) went down between Kristoff and the douches those many years ago? Or that karaoke night where Anna and Hans met? Or the 1st meeting between Elsa and Nic? Or what happens (if anything) between Olaf and the library girl? (crossing my fingers for the guy!). Or Anna's and Kristoff's engagement? (even if it's not 'canon' I'm still curious) And even the wedding! (from, like, everyone's perspective! (you could milk that cow for all it's worth!). And if you're giving us a wedding then you'd also have to show us the first time Kristoff talked with Anna's parents. Maybe you could even show us the conversation Elsa had with her parents when she was 14. Also you could make one of how Kristoff got Sven.
Anyway, take care, keep writing and remember that you are awesome.
Hello there, so, I finished reading the main story the other day and I was going to post a review there but then I saw that you had this snippet-list and well... long story short I'm leaving it here.
I've got to say, this is one of the best Frozen stories I have ever come across. (Top five, definitely). The characterization is flawless, the unfolding of the story is wonderful and well-paced, the blooming romance is beautiful and you left me wanting much, MUCH more. I even loved your OC and I'm usually apprehensive about them! (I loved Nic, though not as much as Elsa, I'm sure).
I loved the perspective in this chapter, about how someone can get to such a dark place by refusing to move on and holding so much resentment inside. He might be a two-faced sunovafish but you made me feel sad for him. (you wrote him beautifully! The pinnacle of static characterization, one character that stays the same by refusing to be dynamic!).
I know Hans is supposed to be the 'bad guy' but, could you also show something good about him? Something that makes me go all, "ohhh, look, he IS human. An unhealthily angry one but still deliciously grey". Doesn't necessarily have to be about redeeming the character but about fleshing him out.
Hey, if you're low on ideas, might I suggest some? (Feel free to skip) Like, how about showing us how Elsa and Anna met Olaf? Or what (exactly) went down between Kristoff and the douches those many years ago? Or that karaoke night where Anna and Hans met? Or the 1st meeting between Elsa and Nic? Or what happens (if anything) between Olaf and the library girl? (crossing my fingers for the guy!). Or Anna's and Kristoff's engagement? (even if it's not 'canon' I'm still curious) And even the wedding! (from, like, everyone's perspective! (you could milk that cow for all it's worth!). And if you're giving us a wedding then you'd also have to show us the first time Kristoff talked with Anna's parents. Maybe you could even show us the conversation Elsa had with her parents when she was 14. Also you could make one of how Kristoff got Sven.
Anyway, take care, keep writing and remember that you are awesome.
1/15/2015 c7 PeanutButterIceCream
Thank you dear Jaffa for writing my prompt. You're very right, this was heavier than I was imagining but Hans is evil, it's not like he doesn't deserve it. I think you've got his sociopath mindset down pot, even in his self-inflicted homeless state he's still looking down on and manipulating people. Such a snake! I think your readers might need some nice Kristanna fluff after that :)
Thank you dear Jaffa for writing my prompt. You're very right, this was heavier than I was imagining but Hans is evil, it's not like he doesn't deserve it. I think you've got his sociopath mindset down pot, even in his self-inflicted homeless state he's still looking down on and manipulating people. Such a snake! I think your readers might need some nice Kristanna fluff after that :)
1/8/2015 c6 Shadowfax321
You should totally get a time skip wedding in, or elsas wedding before you wrap this up haha
You should totally get a time skip wedding in, or elsas wedding before you wrap this up haha
1/8/2015 c6 Shawn Raven
Cute and lovely as always.
Sweet Dispotion huh? It must really be a meaningful song...which I will listen to now! :)
Cute and lovely as always.
Sweet Dispotion huh? It must really be a meaningful song...which I will listen to now! :)
12/31/2014 c5 Shawn Raven
HAHAAHHAHAHAAH, holy shit! Strippers and death metal fiasco in your 19th birthday, way to go Anna. It will be remembered! :)
Poor Kristoff, he just wanted to make it an awesome surprise...
And then the awesome Kristanna feels moment came! I was all awww! cos Kristoff still managed to do something short and sweet for her, and Anna already had her wish. :) 3
Joyful chapter here, can't wait for more!
Oh yeah, and have a Happy New Year! :)
HAHAAHHAHAHAAH, holy shit! Strippers and death metal fiasco in your 19th birthday, way to go Anna. It will be remembered! :)
Poor Kristoff, he just wanted to make it an awesome surprise...
And then the awesome Kristanna feels moment came! I was all awww! cos Kristoff still managed to do something short and sweet for her, and Anna already had her wish. :) 3
Joyful chapter here, can't wait for more!
Oh yeah, and have a Happy New Year! :)
12/31/2014 c5 Shadowfax321
This was a funny chapter. Reminds me of the movie "Project X" haha. Leave it to Olaf to throw a bender.
This was a funny chapter. Reminds me of the movie "Project X" haha. Leave it to Olaf to throw a bender.