11/5/2020 c1 6QuarantineBlues
I don't follow the 100, but I wanted to pop in and say I enjoyed this on its own merits. The first-person POV worked really well, and the style was a breeze to read. If you enjoy writing, keep doing so! It's not "kind of terrible" at all.
I don't follow the 100, but I wanted to pop in and say I enjoyed this on its own merits. The first-person POV worked really well, and the style was a breeze to read. If you enjoy writing, keep doing so! It's not "kind of terrible" at all.
4/29/2016 c1 Guest
I want to start by saying I really enjoy the story and I'm happy that there's finally a Monty fic out there to read.
What has made it kind of typical is how Monty and Jasper just instantly talk about how attractive and smart Amelia is, even though they don't do that to other female characters (especially Jasper who comes off as timid with Mya and Octavia in the beginning)
Like I said I really enjoy the concept and I don't want to see your oc become a Mary Sue, because Monty deserves love too
I want to start by saying I really enjoy the story and I'm happy that there's finally a Monty fic out there to read.
What has made it kind of typical is how Monty and Jasper just instantly talk about how attractive and smart Amelia is, even though they don't do that to other female characters (especially Jasper who comes off as timid with Mya and Octavia in the beginning)
Like I said I really enjoy the concept and I don't want to see your oc become a Mary Sue, because Monty deserves love too
4/11/2016 c2 1Sakura19Haruno95
Just found this and I already love it! There are so few fanfics of MontyxOC and I really hope you will continue this!
Just found this and I already love it! There are so few fanfics of MontyxOC and I really hope you will continue this!
11/30/2014 c1 Guest
Hey, this is sooo good so far, I can't wait to see where you go next. My only kind of complaint is her age, which does seen kinda young, but otherwise I love it :)
Hey, this is sooo good so far, I can't wait to see where you go next. My only kind of complaint is her age, which does seen kinda young, but otherwise I love it :)