
2/4/2022 c5
11libraryxfairy
This is a very cute idea for a story and I love stories from Emily's perspective. Victor almost gave her the rose by the piano! He came so close! A shame this story was never finished but I still enjoyed reading it.

This is a very cute idea for a story and I love stories from Emily's perspective. Victor almost gave her the rose by the piano! He came so close! A shame this story was never finished but I still enjoyed reading it.
11/2/2019 c4
10arwenishtar
PLEASE DON'T TELL ME YOU'RE NOT GONNA FINISH THIS STORY! IT'S WONDERFUL AND I SEE ONLY ONE MORE CHAPTER LEFT!

PLEASE DON'T TELL ME YOU'RE NOT GONNA FINISH THIS STORY! IT'S WONDERFUL AND I SEE ONLY ONE MORE CHAPTER LEFT!
11/2/2019 c3 arwenishtar
DAAAAAMN! So, never mind, Lord Barkis clearly retains his bad guy status. Great chapter! Why the heck would he still want to kill Victor if he poses no threat to his wealth or plans, though? This is happening so quickly!
DAAAAAMN! So, never mind, Lord Barkis clearly retains his bad guy status. Great chapter! Why the heck would he still want to kill Victor if he poses no threat to his wealth or plans, though? This is happening so quickly!
11/2/2019 c2 arwenishtar
Hmmm. Interesting how you portrayed Barkis here. I love the shark and wounded seal metaphor, but then why did you add what he said, and that he said it miserably? Is he gonna be a villain in this story, or will it turn out he really loves Victoria?
Must find out!
Hmmm. Interesting how you portrayed Barkis here. I love the shark and wounded seal metaphor, but then why did you add what he said, and that he said it miserably? Is he gonna be a villain in this story, or will it turn out he really loves Victoria?
Must find out!
9/1/2017 c5
7kaori and yoshi
you just what you need to do! don't worry about us, just focus on school and work. it looks like you have a really heavy load so just focus on yourself and worry about rewriting later when you're not piled with things to do. :)

you just what you need to do! don't worry about us, just focus on school and work. it looks like you have a really heavy load so just focus on yourself and worry about rewriting later when you're not piled with things to do. :)
10/22/2016 c1 Claudia Ferguson
I love it please write more
I love it please write more
4/30/2016 c3 Guest
:)
:)
4/18/2016 c3 Ashley - Fan
Soooo good! I ship Emily and Victor sooooo much!
Soooo good! I ship Emily and Victor sooooo much!
2/5/2016 c3
294DarkPheonix 666
PLEASE UPDATE!
If I really want Victoria to marry Barkus so Emily has her happy ever after and revenge!

PLEASE UPDATE!
If I really want Victoria to marry Barkus so Emily has her happy ever after and revenge!
10/17/2015 c2 Guest
MORE THIS IS GREAT!
MORE THIS IS GREAT!
10/15/2015 c1 Abby
I love it! :) You are a WONDERFUL writer, very descriptive
I love it! :) You are a WONDERFUL writer, very descriptive
6/20/2015 c1 donovandelaney26101
Emily's hair was blonde when she was alive. Emily's hair would be blonde and not black. She would have keeped her flower crown on. Victor would have known who she is. There'd be a scare where her ribs were showing.
Emily's hair was blonde when she was alive. Emily's hair would be blonde and not black. She would have keeped her flower crown on. Victor would have known who she is. There'd be a scare where her ribs were showing.