for Till Death2/28/2015 c8 tlc125
Rose must really love Bella if she doesn't torture Jacob. They're really cute. Rose knows exactly what Bella needs to relax.
Rose must really love Bella if she doesn't torture Jacob. They're really cute. Rose knows exactly what Bella needs to relax.
2/21/2015 c4 Guest
Please please please continue this ! Its fabulous!
Please please please continue this ! Its fabulous!
2/18/2015 c7 Guest
I feel like you are pretty haphazard with your planning of this. 1) bella knew in chapter 6 that they were spooning, why is she so surprised in chapter 7. 2) rosalie already told Charlie and bella she wanted to do a commitment ceremony at dinner in chapter 6. So why the big deal from Charlie in this chapter? He already knew about it and even volunteered to help. Also bellas constant internal monologue gets really tiresome. Seriously, you could read the first sentence of every paragraph and skip the rest and still keep up with the story. Read a book by a good author sometime; they don't do this. Why not? Because you don't have to. It feels like you are just trying to get a higher word count/stretch out your stories. You could update more frequently if you cut out the crap.
I feel like you are pretty haphazard with your planning of this. 1) bella knew in chapter 6 that they were spooning, why is she so surprised in chapter 7. 2) rosalie already told Charlie and bella she wanted to do a commitment ceremony at dinner in chapter 6. So why the big deal from Charlie in this chapter? He already knew about it and even volunteered to help. Also bellas constant internal monologue gets really tiresome. Seriously, you could read the first sentence of every paragraph and skip the rest and still keep up with the story. Read a book by a good author sometime; they don't do this. Why not? Because you don't have to. It feels like you are just trying to get a higher word count/stretch out your stories. You could update more frequently if you cut out the crap.
2/8/2015 c7 Guest
Please update this story is amazing!
Please update this story is amazing!
1/31/2015 c7 Guest
i love this fanfic sooo much
i love this fanfic sooo much
1/27/2015 c7 
4FireEscape1892
Loving this story! Though at times it doesn't seem like bella is such a great friend to Rosalie. We hear all these great things rosalie does for her but what does bella do for her? Wish Edward would get out of the way!
4FireEscape1892Loving this story! Though at times it doesn't seem like bella is such a great friend to Rosalie. We hear all these great things rosalie does for her but what does bella do for her? Wish Edward would get out of the way!
1/26/2015 c7 HiraFrance
Thanks for this update. I'm team E/B but sometimes I like to read Femslah for changing, and R/B is a nice couple.
Read you soon?
Thanks for this update. I'm team E/B but sometimes I like to read Femslah for changing, and R/B is a nice couple.
Read you soon?
1/25/2015 c7 Guest
You updated! Yes! I really like this story. Thank yo
You updated! Yes! I really like this story. Thank yo