
1/7/2015 c2 Luvvykitty
Brilliant storyline you have here! :)
Brilliant storyline you have here! :)
1/7/2015 c3 Luvvykitty
Loved how candid Edward is, and Bella's character is enchanting. Can't wait to see what happens next, please update soon!
Loved how candid Edward is, and Bella's character is enchanting. Can't wait to see what happens next, please update soon!
1/3/2015 c3 Guest
Love the story hope there will soon be more
Love the story hope there will soon be more
12/29/2014 c3 malleelee
Mike Newman needs only appear briefly and I begin to hiss at him. Edward's appearance at Bella's milking barn would be easier for Bella if he would be available sometime other than work hours.
Mike Newman needs only appear briefly and I begin to hiss at him. Edward's appearance at Bella's milking barn would be easier for Bella if he would be available sometime other than work hours.
12/29/2014 c2 malleelee
Rabbits and a rangy dog go well together on a cold morning. So, the youngest brother id a messenger for his brother, and a provider of meat for an injured gamekeeper. Interesting fellow.
Rabbits and a rangy dog go well together on a cold morning. So, the youngest brother id a messenger for his brother, and a provider of meat for an injured gamekeeper. Interesting fellow.
12/29/2014 c1 malleelee
I hear a lilting accent as I read. And I feel the cold of the ice in the muddied ruts. I would be afraid that an injured gamekeeper would be dismissed by his employer, no more to have a home or job. The youngest Cullen boy has caught the eye of the gamekeeper and his daughter.
I hear a lilting accent as I read. And I feel the cold of the ice in the muddied ruts. I would be afraid that an injured gamekeeper would be dismissed by his employer, no more to have a home or job. The youngest Cullen boy has caught the eye of the gamekeeper and his daughter.
12/26/2014 c3
6DreamerRoad
There's a lot to like about this story, I'm happy to be reading it...
I do believe Edward would make Isabella his wife if given the chance. But I couldn't help wonder about Lord Newton's brother Anthony's scandal. Hmm...

There's a lot to like about this story, I'm happy to be reading it...
I do believe Edward would make Isabella his wife if given the chance. But I couldn't help wonder about Lord Newton's brother Anthony's scandal. Hmm...