for Drawn Heart10/10/2019 c12 juliamlinaric.as
I gonna image they reincararnated and lived happily ever after! *cries in a corner*
I gonna image they reincararnated and lived happily ever after! *cries in a corner*
7/19/2018 c12 Fantasy otaku
I think of this as a life lesson and for that I thank the author for opening and teaching our minds. Not everyone or anything is what it seems on the outside and legends and myths are not always true. I had indeed shed some tears of sympathy and sadness for the most part. I hope people will understand and learn from this story that shows a piece of cruel reality and truth
I think of this as a life lesson and for that I thank the author for opening and teaching our minds. Not everyone or anything is what it seems on the outside and legends and myths are not always true. I had indeed shed some tears of sympathy and sadness for the most part. I hope people will understand and learn from this story that shows a piece of cruel reality and truth
4/23/2018 c12 
2Lyall Grimm
I loved reading this, it was awesome. I just love stories with unhappy endings.
Another thing I wanted to say was that this reminded my of the Vocaloid song "Witch Hunt"
2Lyall GrimmI loved reading this, it was awesome. I just love stories with unhappy endings.
Another thing I wanted to say was that this reminded my of the Vocaloid song "Witch Hunt"
7/23/2016 c12 PassingThrough
...That was so sad! It was beautiful, but sad! It was well-written, but sad! It was creative, but sad!
...That was so sad! It was beautiful, but sad! It was well-written, but sad! It was creative, but sad!
6/17/2016 c12 4JJ45
It was amazing. It was deep. I love deep stories. Full of meaning. I can never write like that. Keep writing. You are amazing.
4JJ45It was amazing. It was deep. I love deep stories. Full of meaning. I can never write like that. Keep writing. You are amazing.
3/17/2016 c12 NaruhinaFan13149
No allen! Agh your making me cry! Poor Allen this was such a good but depressing story
No allen! Agh your making me cry! Poor Allen this was such a good but depressing story
6/24/2015 c12 13Tyki075
O.O Holy shit. That was amazing. Really depressing, but still. You really thought EVERYTHING through, huh? I liked the whole twelve chapters thing. It was really good. Amazing job! -)
13Tyki075O.O Holy shit. That was amazing. Really depressing, but still. You really thought EVERYTHING through, huh? I liked the whole twelve chapters thing. It was really good. Amazing job! -)
2/27/2015 c12 11TheFoxesWhoWantedLove
this was awesome... I am sad that Allan died.. but i think it was beautiful. The moral-like-thing at the end about the reason why you made 12 chapters was awesome to. I totally agree with what you said right there.
11TheFoxesWhoWantedLovethis was awesome... I am sad that Allan died.. but i think it was beautiful. The moral-like-thing at the end about the reason why you made 12 chapters was awesome to. I totally agree with what you said right there.
2/15/2015 c12 5Nella Moonblood Royalle
True...tat is painstakingly true T.T
Such a sad Yullen..but i enjoyed it thank u T.T
May u finally be at peace my beloved Allen i;_;i
5Nella Moonblood RoyalleTrue...tat is painstakingly true T.T
Such a sad Yullen..but i enjoyed it thank u T.T
May u finally be at peace my beloved Allen i;_;i
2/15/2015 c9 Nella Moonblood Royalle
Wow i never thought of d coin tat way...
Thank u :) uve just open my eyes wider i guess
Wow i never thought of d coin tat way...
Thank u :) uve just open my eyes wider i guess
12/28/2014 c12 15KillerAkuma
I Like The Ending But It Was Sad. I Felt The Need To Kill The Villages When They Killed Allen.
Fantastic Story
15KillerAkumaI Like The Ending But It Was Sad. I Felt The Need To Kill The Villages When They Killed Allen.
Fantastic Story
12/28/2014 c12 Cutiepie120048
...I don't think I can look at Komui and Leelani the same way...you made me hate people (and I'm a person)...
I just...can't anything right now...too depressed...
...I don't think I can look at Komui and Leelani the same way...you made me hate people (and I'm a person)...
I just...can't anything right now...too depressed...
12/28/2014 c11 Guest
I'm really starting to hate Alma in this story...
I'm really starting to hate Alma in this story...