for Everyone needs fun in the Apocalypse1/7/2015 c1 The Follower
WOW! this is really good! are you going to continue?
WOW! this is really good! are you going to continue?
12/12/2014 c2 Retarded Boy Is Back
Oh boy, that is unexpected but I like it very much! I always love drunken sex and the regretful emotions afterwards...And the violence too.
And why did she had to destroy the remaining alcohol? Man, that sucks big time! NO one destroys a man drink and pleasure!
Oh boy, that is unexpected but I like it very much! I always love drunken sex and the regretful emotions afterwards...And the violence too.
And why did she had to destroy the remaining alcohol? Man, that sucks big time! NO one destroys a man drink and pleasure!
212/5/2014 c1 Retarded Boy Is Back
You need to work on your grammar big time, and it got a bit cluttered at the end...Remember to start a new paragraph every time someone speaks...Maybe space it out a bit.
It was nice, the kiss scene was cute. It would be better if you fixed it up a bit. :)
You need to work on your grammar big time, and it got a bit cluttered at the end...Remember to start a new paragraph every time someone speaks...Maybe space it out a bit.
It was nice, the kiss scene was cute. It would be better if you fixed it up a bit. :)