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12/9/2015 c1 1Jerm069
OMG! This is such a breathtakingly sad romance! I am in love! This is my first story from you and will not be my last. Thank you for the beautiful world you have expounded upon!
7/17/2015 c1 5plums
Your paragraphs are way too long. Most of these could be easily broke. Into two or three paragraphs each and it would make it a lot easier for your readers to follow.
2/18/2015 c1 lou2003us
I really want to see what happens next!

Looking forward to next chapter!

Keep up the great work.
1/13/2015 c1 firebluebird2006
so are you going to continue writing this story?
12/5/2014 c1 Guest
Convoluted melodramatic mess.
12/6/2014 c1 3sleepinglion5398
And we have the other side.

It's gonna be a challenge, juggling two at once.

But it's good. Don't get me wrong, this is the same quality as Darkness. I love it, another one. It's gonna be interesting to see you try and write them side by side though :$ may be too big a task.

Again, I love the character development. Harry's situation was amazing and original. Fleur was exactly how I pictured her and wanted her to be and act.

In short, you got this to the tee. This should be in the bag for ya.

You have a magnificent writing style, one that is clearly logical and descriptive.

My only advice?

Keep doing what you're doing.

Again, another well done for taking it on.

Piloting Insanity

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