for Seven Ladies of Light12/9/2015 c1 
1Jerm069
OMG! This is such a breathtakingly sad romance! I am in love! This is my first story from you and will not be my last. Thank you for the beautiful world you have expounded upon!
1Jerm069OMG! This is such a breathtakingly sad romance! I am in love! This is my first story from you and will not be my last. Thank you for the beautiful world you have expounded upon!
7/17/2015 c1 5plums
Your paragraphs are way too long. Most of these could be easily broke. Into two or three paragraphs each and it would make it a lot easier for your readers to follow.
5plumsYour paragraphs are way too long. Most of these could be easily broke. Into two or three paragraphs each and it would make it a lot easier for your readers to follow.
2/18/2015 c1 lou2003us
I really want to see what happens next!
Looking forward to next chapter!
Keep up the great work.
I really want to see what happens next!
Looking forward to next chapter!
Keep up the great work.
12/5/2014 c1 Guest
Convoluted melodramatic mess.
Convoluted melodramatic mess.
12/6/2014 c1 3sleepinglion5398
And we have the other side.
It's gonna be a challenge, juggling two at once.
But it's good. Don't get me wrong, this is the same quality as Darkness. I love it, another one. It's gonna be interesting to see you try and write them side by side though :$ may be too big a task.
Again, I love the character development. Harry's situation was amazing and original. Fleur was exactly how I pictured her and wanted her to be and act.
In short, you got this to the tee. This should be in the bag for ya.
You have a magnificent writing style, one that is clearly logical and descriptive.
My only advice?
Keep doing what you're doing.
Again, another well done for taking it on.
Piloting Insanity
3sleepinglion5398And we have the other side.
It's gonna be a challenge, juggling two at once.
But it's good. Don't get me wrong, this is the same quality as Darkness. I love it, another one. It's gonna be interesting to see you try and write them side by side though :$ may be too big a task.
Again, I love the character development. Harry's situation was amazing and original. Fleur was exactly how I pictured her and wanted her to be and act.
In short, you got this to the tee. This should be in the bag for ya.
You have a magnificent writing style, one that is clearly logical and descriptive.
My only advice?
Keep doing what you're doing.
Again, another well done for taking it on.
Piloting Insanity