
1/4/2017 c1
19Agrithnum-aut
This is out of whack, no offense. Why in the hell, or moreover, how in the hell does "Shiro" even know about Yhwach? Not only that, but why the duck is he THIS submissive to Ichigo. If his mission really is to protect him, he'd make him work for his REAL power, not have Yhwach knowingly undermine his progress, who is also the person he wants to take over? Sorry if this comes off as aggressive, but I feel as if there could be so much more development in place of blatantly stating the reaches of his power, and, in turn, giving us the guidebook to any developments you plan on making.

This is out of whack, no offense. Why in the hell, or moreover, how in the hell does "Shiro" even know about Yhwach? Not only that, but why the duck is he THIS submissive to Ichigo. If his mission really is to protect him, he'd make him work for his REAL power, not have Yhwach knowingly undermine his progress, who is also the person he wants to take over? Sorry if this comes off as aggressive, but I feel as if there could be so much more development in place of blatantly stating the reaches of his power, and, in turn, giving us the guidebook to any developments you plan on making.
4/24/2016 c1 Guest
Next chapther please
Next chapther please
4/24/2016 c1 Guest
se ve vastante buen por favor suba mas capitulos
se ve vastante buen por favor suba mas capitulos
4/7/2016 c1 Guest
please up date i reakly enjoy this story
please up date i reakly enjoy this story
4/7/2016 c1
1kat1017
is this story a Ichigo/Tier painting only or will you add some more/other girls to the pairing?

is this story a Ichigo/Tier painting only or will you add some more/other girls to the pairing?
4/7/2016 c1
1Sibakys
This is an amazing first chapter, I love Ichibel stories, but people don't post them a lot. Hopefully you update pretty often, and great job btw. Keep up the good work. :)

This is an amazing first chapter, I love Ichibel stories, but people don't post them a lot. Hopefully you update pretty often, and great job btw. Keep up the good work. :)
4/6/2016 c1 Guest
I'm looking forward to your rewite and future chapters
I'm looking forward to your rewite and future chapters
2/21/2015 c1
1Helmsmanjoker
This story that I like so far is not only Halibel and ichigo meet in different circumstances but so far you the direction the story that you are taking is the rescue Arc that I like so far. at least you're one of the authors wants a different approach than most of the authors do it after the winter war, which it can be very tiresome.
So cg037, for best regards that like to keep reading this story including the Naruto stories that you made and you have my support.
Keep up the good work, Helmsmanjoker out.

This story that I like so far is not only Halibel and ichigo meet in different circumstances but so far you the direction the story that you are taking is the rescue Arc that I like so far. at least you're one of the authors wants a different approach than most of the authors do it after the winter war, which it can be very tiresome.
So cg037, for best regards that like to keep reading this story including the Naruto stories that you made and you have my support.
Keep up the good work, Helmsmanjoker out.