
12/8/2014 c1 Blackshiki
Wow um it was good but it was kind of I guess quick. You could have made it longer and I think you need to work on it longer. Like make the fight between sting and natsu longer if you know what I mean. PM me if you need help on it!
Wow um it was good but it was kind of I guess quick. You could have made it longer and I think you need to work on it longer. Like make the fight between sting and natsu longer if you know what I mean. PM me if you need help on it!
12/7/2014 c1
24machomatthew29350
Wait... hold on a minute... your telling me that Sting and Natsu were fighting over Lucy but there never was a fight but Natsu bit her in the neck. Have Sting bite her to. Let's be friends:] Can you read Celestrial Mages please?

Wait... hold on a minute... your telling me that Sting and Natsu were fighting over Lucy but there never was a fight but Natsu bit her in the neck. Have Sting bite her to. Let's be friends:] Can you read Celestrial Mages please?