for Beyond Life and Death1/23/2016 c12 
4Dur'id the Druid
Annnnd that devolved into a horny foul-mouthed gang banger wannabe's wet dream of OOCs.
This HAD so much pontantiol. Future readers, don't waste your time. Unless you just want to read about punks fantasy of being part of the 'upper crust'.
4Dur'id the DruidAnnnnd that devolved into a horny foul-mouthed gang banger wannabe's wet dream of OOCs.
This HAD so much pontantiol. Future readers, don't waste your time. Unless you just want to read about punks fantasy of being part of the 'upper crust'.
1/23/2016 c3 Dur'id the Druid
*holds face in hand and sighs* And here I see you making the big mistake that Radical did with P2. Trying to replace plot, character development, and evolution of the story with shallow stereotypes! Go read / watch a story called "Watchmen" or "Ender's Game" for examples of how NOT to do that!
I'll keep reading for a few more chapters, but only because I hold out the hope that this is just a bad start and the plot is going to become something more than emo angst and characters as shallow as a 6 year old's puppet play.
*holds face in hand and sighs* And here I see you making the big mistake that Radical did with P2. Trying to replace plot, character development, and evolution of the story with shallow stereotypes! Go read / watch a story called "Watchmen" or "Ender's Game" for examples of how NOT to do that!
I'll keep reading for a few more chapters, but only because I hold out the hope that this is just a bad start and the plot is going to become something more than emo angst and characters as shallow as a 6 year old's puppet play.
1/23/2016 c2 Dur'id the Druid
Wow, angsty much?
This is a good concept, and I really like well done post-P1-and-boot-P2-into-the-blind-enteritis stories. But if this is just gonna be a wrist-cutting-angst-fest for the entire story, it's not going to be one of the good ones.
Wow, angsty much?
This is a good concept, and I really like well done post-P1-and-boot-P2-into-the-blind-enteritis stories. But if this is just gonna be a wrist-cutting-angst-fest for the entire story, it's not going to be one of the good ones.
1/15/2016 c12 Someonerandome
Please fucking update
Please fucking update
1/4/2016 c12 the reaper's brawler
Read this story for the second time,and i fucking love it.
So is this story finished or is it abandoned?,cause i do not see this story being in one of you're 'story on hiatus' list.
Read this story for the second time,and i fucking love it.
So is this story finished or is it abandoned?,cause i do not see this story being in one of you're 'story on hiatus' list.
9/24/2015 c12 anom
you are so going to give elisif and dana mercer powers during the fight with blackwatch
you are so going to give elisif and dana mercer powers during the fight with blackwatch
9/14/2015 c3 Guest
Wow um Alex is completely out-of-character... I know he's meant to be taking on a new life and all, but he's just way too OOC.
Wow um Alex is completely out-of-character... I know he's meant to be taking on a new life and all, but he's just way too OOC.
9/8/2015 c12 Guest
very nice
very nice
7/23/2015 c12 Guest
I don't like this anymore. This is getting too ridiculous…
I don't like this anymore. This is getting too ridiculous…
7/23/2015 c12 Guest
Well, I wasn't expecting a chapter to be hilarious as that. Pls make more of those.
Well, I wasn't expecting a chapter to be hilarious as that. Pls make more of those.
7/10/2015 c12 Guest
ok that was fuscking funny as hell heheheheehehehe nice.
ok that was fuscking funny as hell heheheheehehehe nice.
6/13/2015 c11 1Benthino
Humour, Great storyline, Porn, Lovable characters... Gentelmen, the next George R.R Martin!
1BenthinoHumour, Great storyline, Porn, Lovable characters... Gentelmen, the next George R.R Martin!
5/25/2015 c11 Guest
Nice a bit brutal but nice
Nice a bit brutal but nice
5/2/2015 c9 gomt8
Are you going to update this story?, because please update it, Avatar: The Harbringer of Death And Destruction is all about your OC jake, like where's Alex? And why is Alex a human and an asshole on the other stories?, please update this story.
Are you going to update this story?, because please update it, Avatar: The Harbringer of Death And Destruction is all about your OC jake, like where's Alex? And why is Alex a human and an asshole on the other stories?, please update this story.