for Beyond Life and Death4/17/2015 c9 Guest
hey is this story done? if not THEN FUCKING UPDATE
hey is this story done? if not THEN FUCKING UPDATE
4/14/2015 c3 Newtkill
AH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAH YOU HUMOR ME AHAHHAHAH NO BUT THAT SH*T IS FU*KING HILARIOUS AHAHAHAHAHA YOU THINK THAT AHAHAHAHAH OH GOD HOLY SH*T THAT IS GOOD! YOU CAN'T HURT ALEX J. (MERCER) FROST AHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!
AH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAH YOU HUMOR ME AHAHHAHAH NO BUT THAT SH*T IS FU*KING HILARIOUS AHAHAHAHAHA YOU THINK THAT AHAHAHAHAH OH GOD HOLY SH*T THAT IS GOOD! YOU CAN'T HURT ALEX J. (MERCER) FROST AHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!
2/18/2015 c4 Trondason
"Dear old dad and mom were both drug addict and constantly beat him and Dana, day and night. "
Dad actually doesn't exist.
Also, Alex could easily just grow his own furniture. Heck, he could have grown his own house if he wanted to. Blacklight can obviously mimic objects and clothes, so it should be able to mimic wood and brick pretty well. Have his home be a Hive.
"Dear old dad and mom were both drug addict and constantly beat him and Dana, day and night. "
Dad actually doesn't exist.
Also, Alex could easily just grow his own furniture. Heck, he could have grown his own house if he wanted to. Blacklight can obviously mimic objects and clothes, so it should be able to mimic wood and brick pretty well. Have his home be a Hive.
2/18/2015 c2 Trondason
"every time he killed a woman, he felt regret."
... why? Chicks are humans too. As flawed and self absorbed as anyone else (he has two personal examples as well).
"placed his bloodied blazer in the bathroom. "
Why ain't that Biomass too?
And a general complaint, Alex's lines seem off. He's a uncaring bastard, he doesn't crack jokes, especially when he's trying to save someone.
"every time he killed a woman, he felt regret."
... why? Chicks are humans too. As flawed and self absorbed as anyone else (he has two personal examples as well).
"placed his bloodied blazer in the bathroom. "
Why ain't that Biomass too?
And a general complaint, Alex's lines seem off. He's a uncaring bastard, he doesn't crack jokes, especially when he's trying to save someone.
2/18/2015 c1 Trondason
Pretty nice. Just disagree with a few points.
1)Alex should be more than capable of killing himself. He survived a nuke, yeah, but it was a close thing. He could always do it again, and not distance himself like last time. Or he could trip into a volcano. Or he could take a space-ship, and aim it towards the sun.
2)He shouldn't need Darklight to kill the infection. He's the master of the Hive Mind now that Greene is gone. Killing it should be as easy as willing it dead. He probably does similar to any tiny bits of him that gets blown off after all, considering that each little bit does not cause it's own Time Square.
3)Why is Blackwatch admitting to the world what Alex is? Ignoring the fact that it's somewhat unbelievable, they tend to keep a tight lid on all information possible. Even with all the rampaging Alex did, it wouldn't have been too hard to keep his existence beyond a bio-terrorist unknown.
Pretty nice. Just disagree with a few points.
1)Alex should be more than capable of killing himself. He survived a nuke, yeah, but it was a close thing. He could always do it again, and not distance himself like last time. Or he could trip into a volcano. Or he could take a space-ship, and aim it towards the sun.
2)He shouldn't need Darklight to kill the infection. He's the master of the Hive Mind now that Greene is gone. Killing it should be as easy as willing it dead. He probably does similar to any tiny bits of him that gets blown off after all, considering that each little bit does not cause it's own Time Square.
3)Why is Blackwatch admitting to the world what Alex is? Ignoring the fact that it's somewhat unbelievable, they tend to keep a tight lid on all information possible. Even with all the rampaging Alex did, it wouldn't have been too hard to keep his existence beyond a bio-terrorist unknown.
2/13/2015 c9 Guest
fucking awsome
fucking awsome
1/31/2015 c8 I love prototype
I like the utilization of dark humor into this fan fic.
It fits Alex's nature. All in all, good job, and do please continue.
I like the utilization of dark humor into this fan fic.
It fits Alex's nature. All in all, good job, and do please continue.
1/19/2015 c7 Madgirl2424
Hahahahahhahhahhahahhhahahahahahahahahahahaha! (SILENCE)
Notice: Madgirl2424 has just passed out from laughing so hardly at this chapter she gives it a 5 billion star rating and an effenent amount of loving it.
Hahahahahhahhahhahahhhahahahahahahahahahahaha! (SILENCE)
Notice: Madgirl2424 has just passed out from laughing so hardly at this chapter she gives it a 5 billion star rating and an effenent amount of loving it.
1/8/2015 c6 Guest
Keep fucking wrighting this is the only good prototype story so far dude. :-D
Keep fucking wrighting this is the only good prototype story so far dude. :-D
12/10/2014 c2 
3RedMoonSlayer
This is really nice, I like how you interpreted Alex's way of thinking. It's written well too.
3RedMoonSlayerThis is really nice, I like how you interpreted Alex's way of thinking. It's written well too.