for Baby Severide9/24/2022 c278 ravensrookery
Thank you for the lovely fic. I loved your depiction of Kelly and Erin and their family. I really think that Kelly would make an awesome husband and father. He has such a good rapport with children on the show. I hope that you add more chapters when your life is less hectic, and or you find yourself inspired. But if you never add more, I will just have to reread and enjoy what you have already written.
Thank you for the lovely fic. I loved your depiction of Kelly and Erin and their family. I really think that Kelly would make an awesome husband and father. He has such a good rapport with children on the show. I hope that you add more chapters when your life is less hectic, and or you find yourself inspired. But if you never add more, I will just have to reread and enjoy what you have already written.
9/25/2020 c278 astacia
Love this story. It will be interesting to see where her mom's case leads her...hope to see more soon. :)
Love this story. It will be interesting to see where her mom's case leads her...hope to see more soon. :)
4/30/2020 c278 
9Swimming Clara
Wow what an amazing story with all the up's and down's of a normal family. It would be fantastic if you are going to finish it. I hope that there is another chapter. Well done!
9Swimming ClaraWow what an amazing story with all the up's and down's of a normal family. It would be fantastic if you are going to finish it. I hope that there is another chapter. Well done!
2/9/2020 c10 Guest
The fact she said papa before mama and dada has me cracking up
The fact she said papa before mama and dada has me cracking up
1/3/2020 c278 9fireman23
I nearly forgot I had to catch up on this chapter - It's a good continuation of the story. Well done!
9fireman23I nearly forgot I had to catch up on this chapter - It's a good continuation of the story. Well done!
12/30/2019 c278 202Daisyangel
Glad Erin is talking to Kelly about things. Obviously she is still keeping some of it to herself like the file about Bunny's murder resurfacing but she's getting better. Glad to see an update.
202DaisyangelGlad Erin is talking to Kelly about things. Obviously she is still keeping some of it to herself like the file about Bunny's murder resurfacing but she's getting better. Glad to see an update.
12/22/2019 c278 sandygirl
First off I wanna wish everyone who reads and our wonderful author a wonderful holiday and a happy New year. Now this was a great update,loved our Linseride in this update made me smile. Love that Erin is on desk duty for now,but it was so sad she had to read about how bunny died. Thanks for another great update soon!
First off I wanna wish everyone who reads and our wonderful author a wonderful holiday and a happy New year. Now this was a great update,loved our Linseride in this update made me smile. Love that Erin is on desk duty for now,but it was so sad she had to read about how bunny died. Thanks for another great update soon!
12/18/2019 c277 sandygirl
Thanks for updating so fast. That being said what the hell is wrong with erin,the way she treats kelly when he does something dangerous,throws their family in his face for being reckless than she does something like that and expects him to be ok with it. She needs to realize once and for all she isn't single,she is part of a family and they both need to stop making reckless decisions. But I did love how shay helped her mom that was adorable! Hopefully necked update will have a little less drama. Still loving this story.
Thanks for updating so fast. That being said what the hell is wrong with erin,the way she treats kelly when he does something dangerous,throws their family in his face for being reckless than she does something like that and expects him to be ok with it. She needs to realize once and for all she isn't single,she is part of a family and they both need to stop making reckless decisions. But I did love how shay helped her mom that was adorable! Hopefully necked update will have a little less drama. Still loving this story.
12/15/2019 c276 fireman23
You've delivered a good chapter here, well done. It's a bit short for my liking, I think it could have been including the next scene as wel ( or be attached to the previous one), but I still like this story arc. Well done!
You've delivered a good chapter here, well done. It's a bit short for my liking, I think it could have been including the next scene as wel ( or be attached to the previous one), but I still like this story arc. Well done!
12/13/2019 c276 sandygirl
Well first off it's good to see you back,hope all is well! That being said I'm so glad erin is ok, poor powell though. I hope this isn't gonna cause trouble for our couple I'm still sticking too not wanting her to work but I know she has too. This was a great update but I need some family time again with those girls I miss little miss shay.
Well first off it's good to see you back,hope all is well! That being said I'm so glad erin is ok, poor powell though. I hope this isn't gonna cause trouble for our couple I'm still sticking too not wanting her to work but I know she has too. This was a great update but I need some family time again with those girls I miss little miss shay.
10/7/2019 c275 202Daisyangel
Of course Erin doesn't want to get her shoulder checked out. That wuld mean she'd have to admit something is wrong. lol
202DaisyangelOf course Erin doesn't want to get her shoulder checked out. That wuld mean she'd have to admit something is wrong. lol