for Baby Severide5/2/2016 c232 sandygirl
First off i'm so sorry about your hand, please take good care of it and use pot holders from now on and don't do anything that is gonna make it hurt including typing this story will be waiting when it gets better. Now for this update it was just all round cute on every level, Kelly talking too his girls making sure they're ok, Shay making sure her daddy doesn't get just melted my heart but i gotta say Kelly and what he wanted to do for Erin was just so nice, wish i had a guy who would want to give me a day to myself during that time of the month. But i did love Erins reaction when she thought Kelly talked to Chris just had me laughing so much. Was a really great update thanks for it.
First off i'm so sorry about your hand, please take good care of it and use pot holders from now on and don't do anything that is gonna make it hurt including typing this story will be waiting when it gets better. Now for this update it was just all round cute on every level, Kelly talking too his girls making sure they're ok, Shay making sure her daddy doesn't get just melted my heart but i gotta say Kelly and what he wanted to do for Erin was just so nice, wish i had a guy who would want to give me a day to myself during that time of the month. But i did love Erins reaction when she thought Kelly talked to Chris just had me laughing so much. Was a really great update thanks for it.
4/30/2016 c231 sandygirl
Well i'm glad you finished this cause it was a great update, i always love the family time and just hanging out and playing games or just talking. Glad Erin isn't pregnant yet anyway but i did love Kelly and his speech cause that was just what she needed too hear, love their cuddle time too that was really sweet. Can't wait too see what comes next.
Well i'm glad you finished this cause it was a great update, i always love the family time and just hanging out and playing games or just talking. Glad Erin isn't pregnant yet anyway but i did love Kelly and his speech cause that was just what she needed too hear, love their cuddle time too that was really sweet. Can't wait too see what comes next.
4/28/2016 c230 sandygirl
First off welcome back have missed you and this wonderful story, can i just say i love the banter between Kelly and Chase what those guys will do to entertain this little girl just goes too show just how much those little girls are loved, had me laughing so much just too cute all around but man does Erin need to chill out cause Kelly was just kidding with that balloon, who cares what that other lady thought she just needs to take it easy and enjoy her family and not start back on her health kick cause that's never good. Can't wait for the next update and some Linseride time cause i'm missing that.
First off welcome back have missed you and this wonderful story, can i just say i love the banter between Kelly and Chase what those guys will do to entertain this little girl just goes too show just how much those little girls are loved, had me laughing so much just too cute all around but man does Erin need to chill out cause Kelly was just kidding with that balloon, who cares what that other lady thought she just needs to take it easy and enjoy her family and not start back on her health kick cause that's never good. Can't wait for the next update and some Linseride time cause i'm missing that.
4/22/2016 c229 Michnkicks
Kelly is going to love the balloons, Errands going to have to hear from Kelly that she doesn't look fat like she's pregnant. Already have a feeling she's going to start trying to work out more because of that
Kelly is going to love the balloons, Errands going to have to hear from Kelly that she doesn't look fat like she's pregnant. Already have a feeling she's going to start trying to work out more because of that
4/21/2016 c229 sandygirl
Oh well i loved this one even more, Shay just gets cuter and cuter but i hope that Erin doesn't go on a health and exercise kick just because she thinks people thought she looked fat, come on she just had a baby what four months ago she still holding on to that weight which isn't bad but it's not good for her or Emmy if she starts not eating again, although i think the more little Severide's the better but hey that's just me. I think we need a little Linseride romance before his return to work. PLEASE! Thanks again for another great update.
Oh well i loved this one even more, Shay just gets cuter and cuter but i hope that Erin doesn't go on a health and exercise kick just because she thinks people thought she looked fat, come on she just had a baby what four months ago she still holding on to that weight which isn't bad but it's not good for her or Emmy if she starts not eating again, although i think the more little Severide's the better but hey that's just me. I think we need a little Linseride romance before his return to work. PLEASE! Thanks again for another great update.
4/19/2016 c228 sandygirl
First off you are correct your work always come first, we'll still be here so never worry and i'm glad that everything is ok cause i was kinda worried but i'm glad it was just work bogging you down. As far as this update goes i loved it cause sometimes you just need to have them relax and spend time just having fun and being with family, loved Shay testing every ones patience cause i tell you from experience that is what 2yr olds do so that was fun as was Kelly and Erin and their banter so relax this was a nice family day. As far as where you should be you know me i seem to be the only one who doesn't want Erin too go back to work so as far as i'm concerned you can drag that out for as long as it takes.
First off you are correct your work always come first, we'll still be here so never worry and i'm glad that everything is ok cause i was kinda worried but i'm glad it was just work bogging you down. As far as this update goes i loved it cause sometimes you just need to have them relax and spend time just having fun and being with family, loved Shay testing every ones patience cause i tell you from experience that is what 2yr olds do so that was fun as was Kelly and Erin and their banter so relax this was a nice family day. As far as where you should be you know me i seem to be the only one who doesn't want Erin too go back to work so as far as i'm concerned you can drag that out for as long as it takes.
4/17/2016 c227 
13Chicago Firestarter
Well, just found this story on a lazy Sunday afternoon and I love it! I never really read CPD stories but for some reason I looked today. The show's been so disappointing - your version so, so much better. Love the Linseride love, love how their life together with babies has unfolded, and love the drama. Kelly hurt is my favorite because I love seeing the big guy vulnerable and also love the super broken Erin when that happens. Yes, lots of love for this story. Can't wait for an update! You're getting me back in fanfic. Thnx.
13Chicago FirestarterWell, just found this story on a lazy Sunday afternoon and I love it! I never really read CPD stories but for some reason I looked today. The show's been so disappointing - your version so, so much better. Love the Linseride love, love how their life together with babies has unfolded, and love the drama. Kelly hurt is my favorite because I love seeing the big guy vulnerable and also love the super broken Erin when that happens. Yes, lots of love for this story. Can't wait for an update! You're getting me back in fanfic. Thnx.
4/9/2016 c227 202Daisyangel
I can totally see Shay snuggling under Kelly's shirt. That is so cute. Can't wait for the next update.
202DaisyangelI can totally see Shay snuggling under Kelly's shirt. That is so cute. Can't wait for the next update.
4/9/2016 c227 angelsmum
aw such a lovely chapter with Shay and her parents. I love how she crawled into Kelly's tshirt to be close to him.
aw such a lovely chapter with Shay and her parents. I love how she crawled into Kelly's tshirt to be close to him.