for Baby Severide11/9/2015 c184 sandygirl
First off i was so happy to wake up and see this wonderful update cause i really have missed this story, that being said i don't know if it's just me or what but there was a whole different dynamic to this chapter, i realize with Kelly in the hospital it's gonna be different but i gotta say Hank really needs to stop whatever he is trying to do cause if not he's gonna lose Erin and that family cause like it or not Kelly and those little girls will always come first, to make it sound like all this was his fault was totally uncalled for, i know he just cares but the last thing they need is one more thing to worry about, as for Erin she really needs to take better care of herself and eat better or she's gonna be no use to those little girls or Kelly cause like it or not Emmy still nursing means mommy needs to eat better but i really felt bad for Shay i mean all she wants is to go home and have her mommy and daddy there to cuddle with and it broke my heart when they had to leave and Kelly had to stay. Ok i think the rant is over i just want our family dynamic back and i know it will be awhile but i think they all need each other healthy and home soon. Can't wait to see what's next and sorry for going on so long.
First off i was so happy to wake up and see this wonderful update cause i really have missed this story, that being said i don't know if it's just me or what but there was a whole different dynamic to this chapter, i realize with Kelly in the hospital it's gonna be different but i gotta say Hank really needs to stop whatever he is trying to do cause if not he's gonna lose Erin and that family cause like it or not Kelly and those little girls will always come first, to make it sound like all this was his fault was totally uncalled for, i know he just cares but the last thing they need is one more thing to worry about, as for Erin she really needs to take better care of herself and eat better or she's gonna be no use to those little girls or Kelly cause like it or not Emmy still nursing means mommy needs to eat better but i really felt bad for Shay i mean all she wants is to go home and have her mommy and daddy there to cuddle with and it broke my heart when they had to leave and Kelly had to stay. Ok i think the rant is over i just want our family dynamic back and i know it will be awhile but i think they all need each other healthy and home soon. Can't wait to see what's next and sorry for going on so long.
11/4/2015 c183 sydcasy
That chapter was great, loved Hank/Shay part! Can't wait for more of those! :)
That chapter was great, loved Hank/Shay part! Can't wait for more of those! :)
11/4/2015 c183 Severide4Life
So glad you are back! I really like the shorter daily updates. Hope Kelly takes it easy for the next few weeks and gets some quality time in with his girls and Chase. So glad your life has calmed down :)
So glad you are back! I really like the shorter daily updates. Hope Kelly takes it easy for the next few weeks and gets some quality time in with his girls and Chase. So glad your life has calmed down :)
11/4/2015 c183 Michnkicks
I'm so happy you are back! Poor Erin she is a strong woman her kids and husband are lucky to have her. But little Shay aww it was so sad she misses her daddy so much and I'm sure even seing Erin and getting a cuddle would calm her down! I think that Erin and Kelly should hear her being rushed in the hospital because of when she hit her head and just freak out. And come to her rescue. Poor baby, I hope she's okay tho and get lets this little tantrum go. It was so funny sing somebody so little stand up to Hank Like that but he is grandpa Hank with her so he couldn't do anything back. I honestly don't mind waiting for the longer chapters. But please update soon I was so excited when I woke up and saw we had an update thanks girl
I'm so happy you are back! Poor Erin she is a strong woman her kids and husband are lucky to have her. But little Shay aww it was so sad she misses her daddy so much and I'm sure even seing Erin and getting a cuddle would calm her down! I think that Erin and Kelly should hear her being rushed in the hospital because of when she hit her head and just freak out. And come to her rescue. Poor baby, I hope she's okay tho and get lets this little tantrum go. It was so funny sing somebody so little stand up to Hank Like that but he is grandpa Hank with her so he couldn't do anything back. I honestly don't mind waiting for the longer chapters. But please update soon I was so excited when I woke up and saw we had an update thanks girl
11/4/2015 c183 Bella
another game fabulous update. Looking forward to more.
another game fabulous update. Looking forward to more.
11/4/2015 c183 sandygirl
First off i'm so glad you're back i've missed you and your wonderful updates, glad you're done and now hopefully you can sleep and get back to what you enjoy doing and we enjoy reading, that being said i'd rather have longer chapters also so whatever you decide i'm good with, i'm so glad Kelly is getting better and i loved the whole conversation with him and Erin it was so sweet and just love Shay and Hank her telling him how Emmy hates the bottle in favor of mommy, loved her reaction to not getting her way. Can't say i'm ready for Erin to go back to work i love her home with the girls and Kelly when he's there, the whole family dynamics seems so much better when she isn't so hung up on work but i'll get over it. Can't wait for more and so glad you're back.
First off i'm so glad you're back i've missed you and your wonderful updates, glad you're done and now hopefully you can sleep and get back to what you enjoy doing and we enjoy reading, that being said i'd rather have longer chapters also so whatever you decide i'm good with, i'm so glad Kelly is getting better and i loved the whole conversation with him and Erin it was so sweet and just love Shay and Hank her telling him how Emmy hates the bottle in favor of mommy, loved her reaction to not getting her way. Can't say i'm ready for Erin to go back to work i love her home with the girls and Kelly when he's there, the whole family dynamics seems so much better when she isn't so hung up on work but i'll get over it. Can't wait for more and so glad you're back.
11/4/2015 c183 UKgirl71
Hey, welcome back! What a great chapter - tenderness between Kelly and Erin, offset by Hank as babysitter :o)
Hey, welcome back! What a great chapter - tenderness between Kelly and Erin, offset by Hank as babysitter :o)
11/4/2015 c183 biihzane
You are baaaack! And congratulations! Hahahaha Hope you can sleep all you want now, trust me, it's the right thing to do. About the chapters, I think longer chapters are better, in that way you won't have to post everyday, and we'll have more to read, it's a win win.
You are baaaack! And congratulations! Hahahaha Hope you can sleep all you want now, trust me, it's the right thing to do. About the chapters, I think longer chapters are better, in that way you won't have to post everyday, and we'll have more to read, it's a win win.
10/27/2015 c182 
202Daisyangel
I'm glad he's okay,. That they're both okay. I understand about university but I can't wait for your next update. I just started a job last week and this was nice to come home to after a long day today.
202DaisyangelI'm glad he's okay,. That they're both okay. I understand about university but I can't wait for your next update. I just started a job last week and this was nice to come home to after a long day today.
10/23/2015 c182 UKgirl71
You truly are a gifted writer, fleshing out your versions of these characters and making us care about them. Good luck with the uni work, and we'll see you on the other side of that :o)
You truly are a gifted writer, fleshing out your versions of these characters and making us care about them. Good luck with the uni work, and we'll see you on the other side of that :o)
10/23/2015 c182 biihzane
This chapter was perfect, and worth the wait, that was not so long. Don't worry and take your time! We'll be here waiting (: And about CF, I agree with you about Severide, and that woman smells like trouble. I miss Linseride because Erin and Jay are not that cool hahahaha And Herrmann was AWESOME this week!
This chapter was perfect, and worth the wait, that was not so long. Don't worry and take your time! We'll be here waiting (: And about CF, I agree with you about Severide, and that woman smells like trouble. I miss Linseride because Erin and Jay are not that cool hahahaha And Herrmann was AWESOME this week!
10/22/2015 c182 sandygirl
Well this was a wonderful update and so worth the wait, you hit the gambit of emotion in this whole update, Erin trying to get to the hospital in one piece, Shay and her emotions just about broke my heart just so great for such a little girl, just goes to show how much love is in this family, glad our boys are ok and i always love how these guys are always there for each other. As always school and papers come first so any update we get is greatly appreciated and we'll all be here when you come back, we'll miss you of course but we understand. I also agree about what they have done to Kelly, if they just kept him with Erin i don't think this would be happening. Oh well i'm really done with both shows which is why i love the Linseride stories so much so i'll always be grateful to you for the time you have put into these stories. Ps also loved Erin when Hank and Kelly were talking just made me laugh.
Well this was a wonderful update and so worth the wait, you hit the gambit of emotion in this whole update, Erin trying to get to the hospital in one piece, Shay and her emotions just about broke my heart just so great for such a little girl, just goes to show how much love is in this family, glad our boys are ok and i always love how these guys are always there for each other. As always school and papers come first so any update we get is greatly appreciated and we'll all be here when you come back, we'll miss you of course but we understand. I also agree about what they have done to Kelly, if they just kept him with Erin i don't think this would be happening. Oh well i'm really done with both shows which is why i love the Linseride stories so much so i'll always be grateful to you for the time you have put into these stories. Ps also loved Erin when Hank and Kelly were talking just made me laugh.
10/20/2015 c181 Daisyangel
Oh my gosh, I hope Kelly's okay. I liked reading Nadia/Watson's perspective.
Oh my gosh, I hope Kelly's okay. I liked reading Nadia/Watson's perspective.