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8/12/2015 c164 Michnkicks
Omg Chase shocked me! I get that Erin and kelly aren't his parents but I feel like Erin would have been Kind of hurt to hear that. I want to say maybe his parents died on his birthday or something happend around that time. They do and care about him so much. Hopefully they can help hm get over this. I'm happy Shay is happy not with her doll and we don't have to see her so upset anymore. Update soon I wanna know what's going on with chase and want him back to normal
8/11/2015 c163 UKgirl71
Keep your chin up, your stories are incredibly entertaining (and I'm notoriously picky lol)
8/11/2015 c163 sandygirl
Oh my god i am so sorry that you had to go through all that, i can't believe people have nothing better to do than too bully someone over a name get a life people. I say one thing this was a different take on this story but it was fine to me, i loved Kelly wanting to give Shay the cake just to make her happy although they should not give in to her but when you see someone that little that upset that's just what you want to do. I hope Chase lets them in on why he hates his birthday so much but please don't let these idiots stop you from continuing this great story. Feel better and i know it's easier said than done but don't let these morons get the best of you! I hope you have a much better day today and know we're all here for you!
8/10/2015 c162 Clodge6
Really enjoyed this chapter even though it was short...it was nice to see/hear from Kelly. I especially liked the antics he used to get Erin alone :). Looking forward to my email notification soon saying there is a new chapter! On a totally different note, I would love to see Kelly with a son some day...playing sports, teaching him to be a gentleman, taking him to the firehouse.
8/10/2015 c162 Michnkicks
Shay is always so excited to see her big brother and daddy! It was funny swing chase get caught with Nadia by erin and Shay, and then Erin and kelly getting caught by Chase. Shay is so curious about all of this l dating and kissing wow! That's. Big step lol. Like I always say I can't wait to see what happens next even if it's not as long as well long timers are used to.

Thanks
8/10/2015 c162 sandygirl
First off don't ever feel bad about anything, the fact that you are still updating this story and taking the time to do great chapters is all i care about so whenever you update is ok with me because your still writing this story and haven't left us wondering what if's like other Linseride stories that have been started but never finished. I loved this update so much especially both couples being embarrassed that was just too funny, Shay going on a date at two is just too cute. Whether these updates are short or long is ok me so don't ever stress out because we all know life gets in the way so don't worry about anything, just remember to try and relax and find some time for you too we can always wait for an update cause we aren't going anywhere. Have a great we and see you soon.
8/8/2015 c161 Michnkicks
This was a cute bonding moment with Erin and the girls I thought Shay was gonna ask for mama milk to. It would be interesting if she did what would Erin say?
8/8/2015 c161 sandygirl
Wow this was a really cute and funny chapter except for Erins nosey friend, i mean my very good friends ask questions but not someone i'm just a casual friend with so i loved that Erin wanted to keep her time with Kelly just for them. I loved the baby and Erin and the kid throwing the watch and hitting Shay was a little funny but i really thought when Erin was getting reading to nurse Emmy that Shay wanted to nurse too it was so cute how she helps Erin get ready to feed Emmy so they can bake for her daddy and brother. Really missed the boys in the update but i like girl time too. missed you this week but it was a great update.
8/5/2015 c160 Michnkicks
Shay was so active in this chapter, can't wait to see if they get chase an Elsa birthday cake. The funniest thing was shah asking about the date lol her brother must of taught her that one. Update soon please
8/5/2015 c160 sandygirl
Can i just say that it's so cool to come home from errands or just waking up in the morning to see another wonderful update to this story cause i'll be honest on the days we didn't have any they were usually the days i either didn't have that much to do at work or i was off and didn't have a lot to do at home so to have these back on an every day basis is great, so about the ramble now onto the review i'm just gonna say i loved everything about this all girl update, to Erin being sleep deprived to Shay not leaving her alone with all the question, Emmy being back to herself with mommy being gone but i gotta say Erin and her friend wanting to know all the sexy details was just so funny. Thanks for a fun update now we need the men back!
8/4/2015 c159 sandygirl
Well this was a nice surprise to wake up too , hope you're feeling better, this was a great way to end their anniversary week-end having all their friends and family there to celebrate them was really sweet, i so laughed with Hank and the barbecue and teaching Kelly how to use it was really funny, also loved when Erin said why can't you teach me that was funny too but i really loved that they got to spend time with their girls and getting them back into a routine of being home again, i can see Erin never leaving Emmy again until she's older so she doesn't have to give her a bottle but it was really sweet with her and the baby. I don't know about Nadia and Chase i'm still torn about those two as well as Kim and Adam especially if he only proposed because she's pregnant but i'll wait to see about those two until i read more. Thanks for a really cool update.
8/2/2015 c158 Michnkicks
Love this so much! But hey really are Kent for each other.i guess we can say that they had a great time hence the missed check out haha. I'm sure everyone is glad their back home now. Kelly was so sweet for the pictures of Shay and ember. I can't wait to see what happens next.
8/2/2015 c158 sandygirl
Oh i so agree as much as i'm loving these Linseride moments it's great to see them back with their babies and everyone is there to celebrate with them, that being said i loved what you added on to the other chapter is was so loving and so sweet and totally SEXY. I did love Kelly teasing Erin about the condom but i so loved the fact that all she really wanted was to get home and see her babies, seeing every ones cars and immediately thinking something was wrong then being surprised by the rest of Kellys presents and the an throwing a barbecues was the perfect way to end this wonderful anniversary. Thanks again for another great update although i'm sorry to see it end cause now i know we're back to reality but as long as we get some kiddies time with the parents that's good.
8/2/2015 c157 UKgirl71
Am really enjoying this story. You're really good at combining both the drama and the everyday moments.
8/1/2015 c157 sandygirl
Well i don't know about anyone else but i think everything about it was sweet, the tenderness with each other, holding each other without it having to turn into making love, don't get me wrong i love that about them but this was just about them taking the time for each other without crying, hungry babies or a hyper active little girl, it was just our Linseride loving each other with just their touch and feelings without saying much they just know what the other needs. So i think it's great but if you want to add you know i'll read i just can't think of anything else, although i am missing those little girls a lot so i can't wait till they go home and maybe just spend some time with the family. Can't wait to see what's next!
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