for Baby Severide4/7/2015 c104 sandygirl
Well i'm with you i loved everything about this chapter, it was one of your best and there have been plenty. I loved the trials of dealing with a new baby, the crying, trying to figure out what's wrong but i love that Emmy loves the skin to skin contact with mommy that was just so cute, but i think my two favorite parts were the talk with Kelly and Shay that was so cute and Erin letting Shay help give Emmy her bath and pick out her clothes for her so she wouldn't feel left out. You handled all of that so great. Also loved how she handled her mothers case with Hank not letting it get in the way with her family but still letting someone else handle it. Bravo on a great update and can't wait for more.
Well i'm with you i loved everything about this chapter, it was one of your best and there have been plenty. I loved the trials of dealing with a new baby, the crying, trying to figure out what's wrong but i love that Emmy loves the skin to skin contact with mommy that was just so cute, but i think my two favorite parts were the talk with Kelly and Shay that was so cute and Erin letting Shay help give Emmy her bath and pick out her clothes for her so she wouldn't feel left out. You handled all of that so great. Also loved how she handled her mothers case with Hank not letting it get in the way with her family but still letting someone else handle it. Bravo on a great update and can't wait for more.
4/7/2015 c103 sydcasy
Great chapter, loved that part with Frozen being watched for the 100th time :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Great chapter, loved that part with Frozen being watched for the 100th time :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
4/6/2015 c96 LaJoyMechell
Poor erin...hope that this little girl will give her mother a break...so she can sleep, and breathe apparently...and it sucks that erin doesn't have any baby photos of herself, only emphasizing her sad childhood...I'm glad that Shay and the baby will have the best mom ever! I'm glad that erin gives them everything she didn't have, and that voight took her in when he did, because she deserves a great life...and Shay is adorable with her baby doll! I had one when I was little, but all she did was sleep all day, lol...great chapter
Poor erin...hope that this little girl will give her mother a break...so she can sleep, and breathe apparently...and it sucks that erin doesn't have any baby photos of herself, only emphasizing her sad childhood...I'm glad that Shay and the baby will have the best mom ever! I'm glad that erin gives them everything she didn't have, and that voight took her in when he did, because she deserves a great life...and Shay is adorable with her baby doll! I had one when I was little, but all she did was sleep all day, lol...great chapter
4/6/2015 c103 sandygirl
Well i liked this chapter, just some family time with mommy and emmy home, i don't like the idea of Erin helping with her moms case, i understand that it's still her mom but what happened to staying home till Emmy was 6 months old, she's not gonna be thinking straight, be to personally involved and when that happens accidents happen. After everything they've been through she just needs to let Voight and the team handle this, stay home and enjoy her family because if she's learned nothing it's that life is to short and kids grow up too fast.
Well i liked this chapter, just some family time with mommy and emmy home, i don't like the idea of Erin helping with her moms case, i understand that it's still her mom but what happened to staying home till Emmy was 6 months old, she's not gonna be thinking straight, be to personally involved and when that happens accidents happen. After everything they've been through she just needs to let Voight and the team handle this, stay home and enjoy her family because if she's learned nothing it's that life is to short and kids grow up too fast.
4/4/2015 c102 Michnkicks
I love how erin treats chase as their kid to I think it's cute. Happy that he baby is here but sill feel bad for Erin loosing her mom then dealing with her health issues. She has shay hank the squad Kelly and chase to help get her through it all though.
I love how erin treats chase as their kid to I think it's cute. Happy that he baby is here but sill feel bad for Erin loosing her mom then dealing with her health issues. She has shay hank the squad Kelly and chase to help get her through it all though.
2024/4/2015 c102 sandygirl
This was a very heartfelt chapter, Erin trying to deal with her moms death, doubting herself as a mom for a moment, but what i loved the most was how Kelly and Hank were with her giving her the time she needs to process this all, yelling at Kelly to get Shay, yelling at Chase for disappearing, also loved the speech she gave chase about being family and making him the babies godfather it was really sweet i just hope he stays in line now cause i think she will seriously hurt him other wise. I think she needs to grieve and let her emotions out or it's going to eat her up, she should never doubt herself as a mom because she always puts her family first something Bunny wasn't strong enough to do. Have a great holiday, enjoy your family and will see you on the next update.
This was a very heartfelt chapter, Erin trying to deal with her moms death, doubting herself as a mom for a moment, but what i loved the most was how Kelly and Hank were with her giving her the time she needs to process this all, yelling at Kelly to get Shay, yelling at Chase for disappearing, also loved the speech she gave chase about being family and making him the babies godfather it was really sweet i just hope he stays in line now cause i think she will seriously hurt him other wise. I think she needs to grieve and let her emotions out or it's going to eat her up, she should never doubt herself as a mom because she always puts her family first something Bunny wasn't strong enough to do. Have a great holiday, enjoy your family and will see you on the next update.
4/4/2015 c101 biihzane
Ok, Bunny's dead, Erin lost A LOT of blood, she'll feel awful about her mother's death, but where's Chase anyway? And I liked the name
Ok, Bunny's dead, Erin lost A LOT of blood, she'll feel awful about her mother's death, but where's Chase anyway? And I liked the name
4/3/2015 c101 sydcasy
Great update, love the little sisters bonding!
As for the name - it's... something! Sorry can't say I'm a fan of it, I'm more of traditional girl, just gonna with the short version (Emmy) of it when reading. But loved the chapter, the love and the angst in it - awesome!
Great update, love the little sisters bonding!
As for the name - it's... something! Sorry can't say I'm a fan of it, I'm more of traditional girl, just gonna with the short version (Emmy) of it when reading. But loved the chapter, the love and the angst in it - awesome!
4/3/2015 c101 sandygirl
First off now i can breath cause when Erin wasn't feeling good and then she started to bleed i was like no way you would never do that to us but i have to give you credit on two counts, one Erin losing all that blood and never thought the death would have been Bunny, so thought it was Chase so Bravo for the dramatics cause i don't know about anyone else but i was yelling at my computer reading this so great job. Now onto the name i don't know about anyone else but i loved it there is nothing wrong with it in my books, it's different and kinda cool, totally loving Shay with her baby she sounded so cute wanting to know how the baby got out and how Erin is feeding her. All round great update, job well done.
First off now i can breath cause when Erin wasn't feeling good and then she started to bleed i was like no way you would never do that to us but i have to give you credit on two counts, one Erin losing all that blood and never thought the death would have been Bunny, so thought it was Chase so Bravo for the dramatics cause i don't know about anyone else but i was yelling at my computer reading this so great job. Now onto the name i don't know about anyone else but i loved it there is nothing wrong with it in my books, it's different and kinda cool, totally loving Shay with her baby she sounded so cute wanting to know how the baby got out and how Erin is feeding her. All round great update, job well done.
4/2/2015 c100 Michnkicks
A death Nooooo! Omg I can't wait to see shay and the baby, what's going to be a jealous big sister she's too attached to her mommy and daddy
A death Nooooo! Omg I can't wait to see shay and the baby, what's going to be a jealous big sister she's too attached to her mommy and daddy