for Baby Severide8/19/2017 c251 sandygirl
Well I don't care what you say this was one of the best fluff chapters you have written and it was great,I love their family time together cause it's really great some times,trust me it's also theraputic to read great updates too. Great job as always.
Well I don't care what you say this was one of the best fluff chapters you have written and it was great,I love their family time together cause it's really great some times,trust me it's also theraputic to read great updates too. Great job as always.
8/19/2017 c251 
9fireman23
The only bad thing about this chapter: it's ar too short!
Seriously, it's great how you portray Shay and I'm sure soon enough Ember will be like her... Great work!
9fireman23The only bad thing about this chapter: it's ar too short!
Seriously, it's great how you portray Shay and I'm sure soon enough Ember will be like her... Great work!
8/12/2017 c250 fireman23
Wow, 250 chapters... only three times this much and you're having a a thousand! ;)
Great chapter, I love to see them having some time together, although I still don't have a clue as what sort of events to expect next... Welcome back!
Wow, 250 chapters... only three times this much and you're having a a thousand! ;)
Great chapter, I love to see them having some time together, although I still don't have a clue as what sort of events to expect next... Welcome back!
8/12/2017 c250 sandygirl
Well this was a really sweet family update,loved their skating time together and I loved our Linseride wake up call they still have it. But I really liked the end with Erin and that idiot but I love her talk with Kelly so sweet.
Well this was a really sweet family update,loved their skating time together and I loved our Linseride wake up call they still have it. But I really liked the end with Erin and that idiot but I love her talk with Kelly so sweet.
4/1/2017 c249 fireman23
I'd say this chapter is fine in length, and it's good to see Erin trying to get back to work. It's even better to see how she worked out the issues with Hank.
Well done!
I'd say this chapter is fine in length, and it's good to see Erin trying to get back to work. It's even better to see how she worked out the issues with Hank.
Well done!
4/1/2017 c249 sandygirl
Well I loved it but was really surprised how jealous Erin really was I kinda didn't see that coming I really thought she was not ready yet to go back. I am glad the next chapter will be more family cause I'm 'kinda missing that but it's still great to have you back. Great update as always.
Well I loved it but was really surprised how jealous Erin really was I kinda didn't see that coming I really thought she was not ready yet to go back. I am glad the next chapter will be more family cause I'm 'kinda missing that but it's still great to have you back. Great update as always.
3/26/2017 c248 Dharma.W
loving this story sooo much! So glad you posted...love how you created Chase...I love his character soo much! x
loving this story sooo much! So glad you posted...love how you created Chase...I love his character soo much! x
3/26/2017 c248 sandygirl
Oh God I'm so happy for you except the computer of course, I was so happy to wake up to see this wonderful update,been missing this story so much but now it is back so thank you so much but I gotta say you have more on edge to what this talk is about although I'm sure it's about work since I seem to be the only one who wants her to stay home. Can't wait too see what is coming.
Oh God I'm so happy for you except the computer of course, I was so happy to wake up to see this wonderful update,been missing this story so much but now it is back so thank you so much but I gotta say you have more on edge to what this talk is about although I'm sure it's about work since I seem to be the only one who wants her to stay home. Can't wait too see what is coming.
3/26/2017 c248 Guest
Thank you so much for continuing the story! I STILL LOVE IT
Thank you so much for continuing the story! I STILL LOVE IT
3/26/2017 c248 LaJoyMechell
I'm very much still here, lol. I had to do a double take when I saw this in my notifications. I love this story , and have so,ex serious catching up to do , but I cheated a bit and read this new chappie anyway . I love their spontaneous run , and Kelly trying to do more . They're mad cute together , especially when Erin turned it into a race. You're writing flows with ease , captivating me , and before I know it I'm at the review box and slightly saddened by the chapter ending . Great job
I'm very much still here, lol. I had to do a double take when I saw this in my notifications. I love this story , and have so,ex serious catching up to do , but I cheated a bit and read this new chappie anyway . I love their spontaneous run , and Kelly trying to do more . They're mad cute together , especially when Erin turned it into a race. You're writing flows with ease , captivating me , and before I know it I'm at the review box and slightly saddened by the chapter ending . Great job
3/26/2017 c248 fireman23
Let me be the first one to say it: Welcome back!
It's good to see you continuing, but honestly, the chapter is no more than a filler. It's just too short and too slow to be anything else. Still, I can't wait to get back into the story, although I will probably have to go back a few chapters to get into the story again...
Let me be the first one to say it: Welcome back!
It's good to see you continuing, but honestly, the chapter is no more than a filler. It's just too short and too slow to be anything else. Still, I can't wait to get back into the story, although I will probably have to go back a few chapters to get into the story again...