for Into the books10/6/2019 c4 Guest
Hard to read block paragraphs
Hard to read block paragraphs
3/5/2015 c9 Guest
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You are the evilist person ever! HOW DARES YOU ENDS THE CHAPTER THERESABOUTS!?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You are the evilist person ever! HOW DARES YOU ENDS THE CHAPTER THERESABOUTS!?
3/1/2015 c9 
22Frostbite711
*frowns* No offense, but You should either look for someone who would write chapters with you, or get a Beta.
22Frostbite711*frowns* No offense, but You should either look for someone who would write chapters with you, or get a Beta.
3/1/2015 c2 Frostbite711
I think you should see a Beta. Interesting story line, but I think it could use a little more.
I think you should see a Beta. Interesting story line, but I think it could use a little more.
2/27/2015 c9 Guest
Okay, Okay, I know you feel special. But GET A MOVE ON! WHAT ARE THEY GOING TO DO TO MADDIE? WHERE DID GILAN GO? TREE HOUSE? ACTION, PLEASE!... :( I'm sorry. I like it.
Okay, Okay, I know you feel special. But GET A MOVE ON! WHAT ARE THEY GOING TO DO TO MADDIE? WHERE DID GILAN GO? TREE HOUSE? ACTION, PLEASE!... :( I'm sorry. I like it.
1/17/2015 c7 2Talin Oakwood
I dont know how to share stories with anyone. But sharing a story with another author sounds like a good idea because different people have different ideas which can make a story more interesting to a variety of people. Good luck!
2Talin OakwoodI dont know how to share stories with anyone. But sharing a story with another author sounds like a good idea because different people have different ideas which can make a story more interesting to a variety of people. Good luck!
1/4/2015 c3 Amanda Racette
Don't worry, there is a difference between describing, and being offensive. Yes I am a girl, so there.
Don't worry, there is a difference between describing, and being offensive. Yes I am a girl, so there.
12/19/2014 c6 Lizzy
You should make your chapters a bit longer. Like three of your chapters combined. REALY like the plot! I'm thinking of getting an account as I'm already writing a fanfic and two friends end up getting trapped in their fav series Ranger's Apprentice!
You should make your chapters a bit longer. Like three of your chapters combined. REALY like the plot! I'm thinking of getting an account as I'm already writing a fanfic and two friends end up getting trapped in their fav series Ranger's Apprentice!
12/15/2014 c6 elvishrangerwolf
good, but try to make your chapters longer
good, but try to make your chapters longer
12/14/2014 c6 Talin Oakwood
Okay. If you could, please make your chapters a bit longer. Other than that, you are doing really good for a first timer! (I'm a first timer too. My 2nd story is just an essay I had to do for English class)
Okay. If you could, please make your chapters a bit longer. Other than that, you are doing really good for a first timer! (I'm a first timer too. My 2nd story is just an essay I had to do for English class)
12/14/2014 c6 4Stormrunner74
I want tell you how long your story has to be(its yours), but i can give advice. I try to keep my chapters over a thousand words at least, unless the story really needs to be cut off at a certain moment. My stories(on my computer and in my notebook...not posted here...no Fanfics...yet) are all really long. When i started writing i went to my English and reading teachers for help editing and planning. Try that. Also you seem to post a lot faster then most people. Take a few days type a thousand word chapter and then post. Sacrifice update speed for length and quality.
4Stormrunner74I want tell you how long your story has to be(its yours), but i can give advice. I try to keep my chapters over a thousand words at least, unless the story really needs to be cut off at a certain moment. My stories(on my computer and in my notebook...not posted here...no Fanfics...yet) are all really long. When i started writing i went to my English and reading teachers for help editing and planning. Try that. Also you seem to post a lot faster then most people. Take a few days type a thousand word chapter and then post. Sacrifice update speed for length and quality.
12/14/2014 c4 2Talin Oakwood
Surprise surprise, Rangers. That's what you get for making false accusations and kidnapping someone's sister! This is kinda funny cuz i wanna be a Ranger. Gilan must've been terrified when Will's arrow flashed before his eyes!
2Talin OakwoodSurprise surprise, Rangers. That's what you get for making false accusations and kidnapping someone's sister! This is kinda funny cuz i wanna be a Ranger. Gilan must've been terrified when Will's arrow flashed before his eyes!
12/13/2014 c4 4Stormrunner74
Make the chapters longer, use more detail, try out omniscient pov, and switch pic a bit less and you've got it. It's promising.
4Stormrunner74Make the chapters longer, use more detail, try out omniscient pov, and switch pic a bit less and you've got it. It's promising.