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10/6/2019 c4 Guest
Hard to read block paragraphs
4/25/2015 c2 5Lazerkat
You can't put pictures in the story. Only words
3/5/2015 c9 Guest
3/1/2015 c9 22Frostbite711
*frowns* No offense, but You should either look for someone who would write chapters with you, or get a Beta.
3/1/2015 c6 Frostbite711
All your chapters are short.
3/1/2015 c2 Frostbite711
I think you should see a Beta. Interesting story line, but I think it could use a little more.
2/27/2015 c9 Guest
Okay, Okay, I know you feel special. But GET A MOVE ON! WHAT ARE THEY GOING TO DO TO MADDIE? WHERE DID GILAN GO? TREE HOUSE? ACTION, PLEASE!... :( I'm sorry. I like it.
1/17/2015 c7 2Talin Oakwood
I dont know how to share stories with anyone. But sharing a story with another author sounds like a good idea because different people have different ideas which can make a story more interesting to a variety of people. Good luck!
1/4/2015 c3 Amanda Racette
Don't worry, there is a difference between describing, and being offensive. Yes I am a girl, so there.
12/19/2014 c6 Lizzy
You should make your chapters a bit longer. Like three of your chapters combined. REALY like the plot! I'm thinking of getting an account as I'm already writing a fanfic and two friends end up getting trapped in their fav series Ranger's Apprentice!
12/15/2014 c6 elvishrangerwolf
good, but try to make your chapters longer
12/14/2014 c6 Talin Oakwood
Okay. If you could, please make your chapters a bit longer. Other than that, you are doing really good for a first timer! (I'm a first timer too. My 2nd story is just an essay I had to do for English class)
12/14/2014 c6 4Stormrunner74
I want tell you how long your story has to be(its yours), but i can give advice. I try to keep my chapters over a thousand words at least, unless the story really needs to be cut off at a certain moment. My stories(on my computer and in my notebook...not posted Fanfics...yet) are all really long. When i started writing i went to my English and reading teachers for help editing and planning. Try that. Also you seem to post a lot faster then most people. Take a few days type a thousand word chapter and then post. Sacrifice update speed for length and quality.
12/14/2014 c4 2Talin Oakwood
Surprise surprise, Rangers. That's what you get for making false accusations and kidnapping someone's sister! This is kinda funny cuz i wanna be a Ranger. Gilan must've been terrified when Will's arrow flashed before his eyes!
12/13/2014 c4 4Stormrunner74
Make the chapters longer, use more detail, try out omniscient pov, and switch pic a bit less and you've got it. It's promising.

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