for Knock on Wood4/29/2019 c4 billweasley07
Okay I love this story so far! My only mistake I found is you put "they solved it" instead of "we solved it"...does that make sense?
Okay I love this story so far! My only mistake I found is you put "they solved it" instead of "we solved it"...does that make sense?
10/5/2016 c25 Bjartskular
I enjoyed the story and trying to spot all of your references. I recognized the Divergent trilogy and perhaps Percy Jackson. You mentioned the Maze Runner movie and complained about it, but it's not bad at all compared to the Eragon movie. That truly sucked. One last thing; I don't know if it's intentional, but "perfect" in your username should have the e and the r switched. Thanks for the great story. I can't wait for the sequel! -Bjartskular
I enjoyed the story and trying to spot all of your references. I recognized the Divergent trilogy and perhaps Percy Jackson. You mentioned the Maze Runner movie and complained about it, but it's not bad at all compared to the Eragon movie. That truly sucked. One last thing; I don't know if it's intentional, but "perfect" in your username should have the e and the r switched. Thanks for the great story. I can't wait for the sequel! -Bjartskular
3/27/2015 c24 
6Krisicake
Pluto should totally be a planet. Just because it's really far away from the sun doesn't mean that it shouldn't be a planet! Planets have feelings too!
6KrisicakePluto should totally be a planet. Just because it's really far away from the sun doesn't mean that it shouldn't be a planet! Planets have feelings too!
3/15/2015 c20 pleasedontfindmyfanfiction21
We need more cute newt/rose moments!
Something like where newt can't do something, like read and she teaches him.
Love the story!
We need more cute newt/rose moments!
Something like where newt can't do something, like read and she teaches him.
Love the story!
3/8/2015 c23 Krisicake
What? Second to last chapter? I am now sad... Are you going to make a Scorch Trials continuation for this?
What? Second to last chapter? I am now sad... Are you going to make a Scorch Trials continuation for this?
3/5/2015 c22 Eispodka
LOL So funny! ZD
LOL So funny! ZD
3/5/2015 c22 Krisicake
TERESA USED SPONGEBOB'S HOUSE AS A WEPON. THAT MEANS SPONEBOB IS TOTALLY BAD-ASS. HIS HOISE IS A WEPON. WHO WOULD HAVE THOUGHT SPONGEBOB WAS THAT BAD-ASS?
TERESA USED SPONGEBOB'S HOUSE AS A WEPON. THAT MEANS SPONEBOB IS TOTALLY BAD-ASS. HIS HOISE IS A WEPON. WHO WOULD HAVE THOUGHT SPONGEBOB WAS THAT BAD-ASS?
3/1/2015 c21 3Cat Whiskers and Novels
OMG I LOVE THIS *makes odd sound* follow for follow?
Divergent Amity Transfer
3Cat Whiskers and NovelsOMG I LOVE THIS *makes odd sound* follow for follow?
Divergent Amity Transfer
2/10/2015 c20 11Chucklez-Lives-On
Well, you requested I read your fic, so here I am. Hello!
This is a pretty good first fic! It only has minor flaws- be careful of random narrator changes- you're writing in first person, but there are occasions when you have third person (I'm not saying in this chapter specifically, but there are occasions throughout the fic). You might also want to slow down Rose's and Newt's relationship a little bit, as well as Rain's and Minho's.
I don't usually read these kinds of fics, because I think a lot of these fics struggle with not making the protagonists Mary-Sues, however, you do pretty well with keeping Rose and Rain out of the Mary-Sue zone (but that is also something else to be aware of). This is well-written and a strong first fic.
11Chucklez-Lives-OnWell, you requested I read your fic, so here I am. Hello!
This is a pretty good first fic! It only has minor flaws- be careful of random narrator changes- you're writing in first person, but there are occasions when you have third person (I'm not saying in this chapter specifically, but there are occasions throughout the fic). You might also want to slow down Rose's and Newt's relationship a little bit, as well as Rain's and Minho's.
I don't usually read these kinds of fics, because I think a lot of these fics struggle with not making the protagonists Mary-Sues, however, you do pretty well with keeping Rose and Rain out of the Mary-Sue zone (but that is also something else to be aware of). This is well-written and a strong first fic.
1/19/2015 c19 6Krisicake
I HATED THE MOVIE! If you could murder movies I would murder The Maze Runner, The Lightning Theif and The Sea of Monsters. All of them are NOTHING like the books! (creators of the movies:Hey they were good movies! me:*throughs the books at them* Read these then tell me what you think about the movies. Creators of the movies after reading the books:The movies were horrible! me:Told ya! NOW RE-MAKE THEM! Creatos of the movies:*run away in fear if being pelted with books*)
6KrisicakeI HATED THE MOVIE! If you could murder movies I would murder The Maze Runner, The Lightning Theif and The Sea of Monsters. All of them are NOTHING like the books! (creators of the movies:Hey they were good movies! me:*throughs the books at them* Read these then tell me what you think about the movies. Creators of the movies after reading the books:The movies were horrible! me:Told ya! NOW RE-MAKE THEM! Creatos of the movies:*run away in fear if being pelted with books*)
1/10/2015 c18 Ruth and Alby
When are more girls coming into the glade? WE NEED MOR GIRLS
When are more girls coming into the glade? WE NEED MOR GIRLS
1/10/2015 c18 Sneha
So good
So good
1/11/2015 c18 11HogwartsRocks
Yes, a story someone has updated in less than a year! Loving it so far, apart from a few minor details, but hey, we all have our preferences. Can't wait for a new chapter. And I prefer Jessie :)
11HogwartsRocksYes, a story someone has updated in less than a year! Loving it so far, apart from a few minor details, but hey, we all have our preferences. Can't wait for a new chapter. And I prefer Jessie :)