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6/27/2021 c4 Guest
I like this is so funny anjanahhahahahahha
I like this is so funny anjanahhahahahahha
5/14/2021 c19 Sakuraloml
The first few chapters brings tears to my eyes, and my stomach hurts too... I laughed too hard...
The first few chapters brings tears to my eyes, and my stomach hurts too... I laughed too hard...
10/21/2020 c4 Guest
This had me laughing, loved it. ;)
This had me laughing, loved it. ;)
6/6/2020 c4 Guest
I hate kakashi. Who does he think he is to kick sasuke out of the delivery room when HIS wife is giving birth to HIS child?
I hate kakashi. Who does he think he is to kick sasuke out of the delivery room when HIS wife is giving birth to HIS child?
6/30/2015 c17 
29fanofthisfiction
Heightened emotion and ample shock are encapsulated in this wonderful piece. Tackling the situation of facing the truth and either fixing or resolving to abandon the problem was touching. A fight to start or end things was the perfect place to go for the depiction of what is going on with Sasu/Saku and their lives.
29fanofthisfictionHeightened emotion and ample shock are encapsulated in this wonderful piece. Tackling the situation of facing the truth and either fixing or resolving to abandon the problem was touching. A fight to start or end things was the perfect place to go for the depiction of what is going on with Sasu/Saku and their lives.
6/30/2015 c16 fanofthisfiction
A nice subtle capture on the loneliness of waiting when a beloved is gone. Sort of makes me hope those still waiting for others to return home have some of their moments sprinkled with hope of an impending return too.
A nice subtle capture on the loneliness of waiting when a beloved is gone. Sort of makes me hope those still waiting for others to return home have some of their moments sprinkled with hope of an impending return too.
6/30/2015 c15 fanofthisfiction
You almost had me wondering what Sakura's thoughts were of his hair and how it hasn't changed a much. ;)
You almost had me wondering what Sakura's thoughts were of his hair and how it hasn't changed a much. ;)
6/30/2015 c14 fanofthisfiction
Nice and apt chapter title and end to this tale. It worked very well just using Sasuke's inner thought so he could enjoy the moment.
Nice and apt chapter title and end to this tale. It worked very well just using Sasuke's inner thought so he could enjoy the moment.
6/30/2015 c13 fanofthisfiction
Cute reference to Kakashi with the scarecrow line was my favorite but I adored in general how this was told. Light and sweet with just a touch of romance.
Cute reference to Kakashi with the scarecrow line was my favorite but I adored in general how this was told. Light and sweet with just a touch of romance.
6/30/2015 c12 fanofthisfiction
A fitting chapter to encapture some thoughts just before Sasuke leaves Sakura again. The lead up to the good-bye 'thank you' is very telling and somewhat eases the pain, frustration, and misunderstanding that might arise from such a blunt departure.
A fitting chapter to encapture some thoughts just before Sasuke leaves Sakura again. The lead up to the good-bye 'thank you' is very telling and somewhat eases the pain, frustration, and misunderstanding that might arise from such a blunt departure.
6/30/2015 c11 fanofthisfiction
You have the magic working here to tug at the heartstrings. The dialogue is really telling and the prose just takes the reader right to the situation at hand. Definitely worthy of a second read!
You have the magic working here to tug at the heartstrings. The dialogue is really telling and the prose just takes the reader right to the situation at hand. Definitely worthy of a second read!
6/30/2015 c10 fanofthisfiction
It is ...and does have impact telling things this way.
It's not...something I have seen before but it works.
It's a nice short story to read...and it is really that simple. Thanks for sharing!
It is ...and does have impact telling things this way.
It's not...something I have seen before but it works.
It's a nice short story to read...and it is really that simple. Thanks for sharing!
6/27/2015 c9 fanofthisfiction
This inner thought drabble was a nice summation of things just before Sasuke comes back from his venture away from the Village to find himself. Short and sweet but packed with all we could hope he considers.
This inner thought drabble was a nice summation of things just before Sasuke comes back from his venture away from the Village to find himself. Short and sweet but packed with all we could hope he considers.