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2/15 c1 Starlafoxfire
very well done. thank you
3/9/2020 c1 Guest77
*sobs* that was beautiful written. You are right about the male rape being not properly addressed/dealt with in fiction. Just because it’s man, doesn’t mean it can’t happen/or that it’s the victim’s fault. That argument is bad as saying that women who are pregnant with their rapist’s child don’t deserve to get an abortion. Enough of my ramblings. Poor Wally, so glad Artemis was caring and understanding. And I sure hope that crazy bitch, Queen Bee, gets what’s coming to her. And hopefully, it’s from Artemis.
2/24/2019 c1 Woodpeckers nest
You handled this sensitive subject very well and mature. It's very realistic and Artemis meeting Wally with such patience and understanding is truly heart-warming.
7/30/2018 c1 24IWriteFanfictionBecauseOfEggs
Honestly, no fanfiction has ever gotten me to cry and this one was close, I could feel the tears coming. It was so good, I love how Artemis was so accepting, and Wally just couldnt take it, he couldnt, he believes he cheated on her, he didnt think he deserved her, he didnt understand why she wasnt mad.

All in all it was absolutely amazing
3/14/2018 c1 Guest
I remember I read this like two years ago, and it's still really good
3/11/2018 c1 11SunBinamra
Okay, I just left a review on another fic about my heart breaking but YOU PULVERIZED MY HEART HERE, damn it. Oh god, poor Wally, I sincerely hope this doesn't happen (or has happened) in canon, no offense. But I love the way Artemis supports him, that is beautiful.
8/31/2017 c1 1fredstarwrites
I like this because it's very mature and this how a person would react and this a subject that never gets mentioned let alone written about
7/28/2017 c1 RedRoseWhiskey
Oh this hurt me. This hurt me so good TT
4/28/2016 c1 1Blaze Stone
Very well done. I tend to play along with whatever world the author tries to create but this is something that always bugs me. Well done.
12/22/2015 c1 Spirit Of The Black Wolf
Holly shit I'm not sure what to say... It was very good story very emotional and very thought provoking it probably possible for it to happen with Viagra and those kind of drugs. Just think how many men are being verbally, emotionally and physical abused by their wife or their girlfriend and don't tell anyone just because of the stigma they get from it.
Looking forward for you're next fanfic.
7/2/2015 c1 Random Reader
Wow. This...this is...I really don't know what to say (and for me to be at a loss of words...) You captured the emotions and the characters beautifully! One thing I look for in fanfictions is for the characters in the show/book/whatever to be believable. Would Wally and Artemis, if placed in this situation, really react like this? You did a great job at making me believe that this really happened to them. They are both just too cute and sweet! I love it! :D I also really appreciate the author's note at the beginning. Glad to see people out there who think outside the metaphorical box. ;)
5/18/2015 c1 1WonderWalrus
I really love this, because it shows a vulnerability in Wally that is never really explored in the series, and Artemis' response is just perfect. Awesome.
5/12/2015 c1 Huntress
Anybody else really wanna kill Queen Bee? This story really appealed to the characters internal emotions and thoughts mainly Artemis'. It plays with the readers emotions as well. It triggers the " I gonna kill Queen Bee" emotion. This wasn't offensive and it's appreciated that you put that note I the beginning. So basically, your story is awesome!
2/15/2015 c1 Guest
I haven't, actually read your story yet ( sorry! I really sure it's good but I wanted to say this.) Thank you for your authors note, rape is not an issue that should be treated lightly and it should be taken seriously for all. It touched my heart to actually see someone say this outside of books and spefic talks.
Thank you so much.
12/23/2014 c1 27Bookworm85
I think you did a great job writing about this topic with sensitivity. That trope makes me mad too, and I'm glad to see you challenging it.
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