6/2/2022 c1 3blackarrowprime94
Felt rushed and a little repetitive in some parts, seemed a bit like a grade schooler wrote it. Overall it was a cute story though
Felt rushed and a little repetitive in some parts, seemed a bit like a grade schooler wrote it. Overall it was a cute story though
8/19/2021 c1 AutisticPhantomOtaku
It looks like it's been awhile since you last updated this story. It's pretty good so far. Please continue!
It looks like it's been awhile since you last updated this story. It's pretty good so far. Please continue!
10/24/2017 c1 Guest
You're good
You're good
4/2/2016 c1 3Maximumni
In your summary, you spelt "Dani" wrong. Also, throughout the entire story. It's Dani.
In your summary, you spelt "Dani" wrong. Also, throughout the entire story. It's Dani.
8/1/2015 c1 Guest
This is cute. Really cute
This is cute. Really cute
1/5/2015 c1 Guest
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww. Please write another chapter! I want to see her meet Jazz!
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww. Please write another chapter! I want to see her meet Jazz!
12/22/2014 c1 Guest
This one shot is way too similar to the fanfic "Daughter or a phantom"
This one shot is way too similar to the fanfic "Daughter or a phantom"
12/21/2014 c1 MizoreShirayukiFan
I'd love to fave this but isn't it just a one-shot? Or did you click that accidentally or something?
I'd love to fave this but isn't it just a one-shot? Or did you click that accidentally or something?
12/18/2014 c1 Fox of the Emerald Isle
I love these Daddy Danny stories too. I think you should turn this into a multi-chapter story, it would be like your own unique take on Storymaster1000's "Daughter of a Phantom" fic.
I love these Daddy Danny stories too. I think you should turn this into a multi-chapter story, it would be like your own unique take on Storymaster1000's "Daughter of a Phantom" fic.
12/18/2014 c1 8Mazamba
This is frigging adorable. I would say that Dani's acting too childish, but there's no real way to predict the way that a 12 year old girl would react to suddenly having a family so I'll still fave it.
This is frigging adorable. I would say that Dani's acting too childish, but there's no real way to predict the way that a 12 year old girl would react to suddenly having a family so I'll still fave it.
12/18/2014 c1 145Invader Johnny
Heh heh heh Danielle is indeed holding onto the childlike wonder that makes Danni see her as his little girl, XD.
Invader Johnny Signing Off.
Heh heh heh Danielle is indeed holding onto the childlike wonder that makes Danni see her as his little girl, XD.
Invader Johnny Signing Off.