for The Stars Rained Down Like Embers1/6/2016 c17 
3Angelina08
AMAZING...
I just came back after my vacation and when I saw that you've updated, I was really happy... This is like a new year treat...
I can feel Grimmjow's feelings through the words you've used... Just AWESOME...
You write this like a poem and it clearly explains everything...
"Ichigo peered up at the warlord" OH Grimmjow would have taken a long gulp just staring at his GOD. And the ever powerful Grimmjow finding reasons to just hold Ichigo... That was so adorable. But yeah Ichigo is beautiful... ;-)
And Orihime is also there. Didn't see that coming.
Then will Rukia, Renji and the others come?
Well I guess I've to wait and watch :-)
Later...
3Angelina08AMAZING...
I just came back after my vacation and when I saw that you've updated, I was really happy... This is like a new year treat...
I can feel Grimmjow's feelings through the words you've used... Just AWESOME...
You write this like a poem and it clearly explains everything...
"Ichigo peered up at the warlord" OH Grimmjow would have taken a long gulp just staring at his GOD. And the ever powerful Grimmjow finding reasons to just hold Ichigo... That was so adorable. But yeah Ichigo is beautiful... ;-)
And Orihime is also there. Didn't see that coming.
Then will Rukia, Renji and the others come?
Well I guess I've to wait and watch :-)
Later...
1/6/2016 c17 10kira1525
I was beginning to think you'd died D: so excited about this chapter! Poor Ichi ):
Update again soon!
10kira1525I was beginning to think you'd died D: so excited about this chapter! Poor Ichi ):
Update again soon!
1/6/2016 c17 Guest
YESS! HE HAS AWAKEN! I waited for this scene... Thanks for the update Author.
- anne623
YESS! HE HAS AWAKEN! I waited for this scene... Thanks for the update Author.
- anne623
1/6/2016 c17 65honeyMellon
Poor Ichigo! Again your words are like magic and the images they conjur are so real, so solid that it was watching a movie. Well done!
65honeyMellonPoor Ichigo! Again your words are like magic and the images they conjur are so real, so solid that it was watching a movie. Well done!
1/6/2016 c17 1AWholeFleetOfShips
Wow, I really liked this chapter. I'm glad Ichigo is getting better, though he's not out of the woods yet. And, well, I took guilty pleasure in Grimmjow's reactions towards Orihime. Don't get me wrong, I don't hate her. But I love fics that feature Grimmjow basically putting her in her place, to be brutally blunt. :) that aside, altogether a great chapter :) I'm looking forward to the next one :)
1AWholeFleetOfShipsWow, I really liked this chapter. I'm glad Ichigo is getting better, though he's not out of the woods yet. And, well, I took guilty pleasure in Grimmjow's reactions towards Orihime. Don't get me wrong, I don't hate her. But I love fics that feature Grimmjow basically putting her in her place, to be brutally blunt. :) that aside, altogether a great chapter :) I'm looking forward to the next one :)
1/6/2016 c17 ronaldo
Grimmjow 4 bottom in this
Grimmjow 4 bottom in this
1/6/2016 c17 Sumeri
This just gets more and more magnificent with each passing chapter! Sorry I have no constructive critique, but I just
I'm unable to
i can not deal
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa he's FINALLY awake! And worried sick Grimmy tugs at my heart like nothing else ;_; but YAY we got to see them interacting at last, ghhhhh I can't wait to see how it goes when Ichigo recovers more! I kinda wonder if Shirosaki's gonna appear again at some point.
Thank you for this!
This just gets more and more magnificent with each passing chapter! Sorry I have no constructive critique, but I just
I'm unable to
i can not deal
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa he's FINALLY awake! And worried sick Grimmy tugs at my heart like nothing else ;_; but YAY we got to see them interacting at last, ghhhhh I can't wait to see how it goes when Ichigo recovers more! I kinda wonder if Shirosaki's gonna appear again at some point.
Thank you for this!
1/6/2016 c17 Guest
Thank u so much for this update, it was awesome and epic, thank kami u updated this week, plz update again soon
PS MY NAME IS MUGETSU NURA
Thank u so much for this update, it was awesome and epic, thank kami u updated this week, plz update again soon
PS MY NAME IS MUGETSU NURA
12/30/2015 c16 4Tidon
I can't wait for the next chapter. I can feel it...the smex is near. Nice chapter as always!
4TidonI can't wait for the next chapter. I can feel it...the smex is near. Nice chapter as always!
12/29/2015 c1 4cute blackberry
Hi! This is my first time also playing the game, so I hope my review is helpful.
Opening-Very good. It aims for me to keep reading farther which is of course what is wanted.
Writing-Your writing style is very natural feeling. It feels fantasy like in terms of speaking also has a sophisticated nature.
Spelling and grammar-10/10, I haven't found one error! So good job.
Enjoyment-Overall I loved this chapter very much, I felt as if I could see and feel the world something I really love in a story.
4cute blackberryHi! This is my first time also playing the game, so I hope my review is helpful.
Opening-Very good. It aims for me to keep reading farther which is of course what is wanted.
Writing-Your writing style is very natural feeling. It feels fantasy like in terms of speaking also has a sophisticated nature.
Spelling and grammar-10/10, I haven't found one error! So good job.
Enjoyment-Overall I loved this chapter very much, I felt as if I could see and feel the world something I really love in a story.
12/28/2015 c16 Guest
Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz update
Mugetsu Nura
Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz update
Mugetsu Nura