for The Stars Rained Down Like Embers4/15/2016 c20 Gifford
Simply loving the story so far, hope it isn't on break for too long as I really wanna see the end. You are one of the authors left on this website that can grib me! Hope to see more soon. Keep up the amazing work x
Simply loving the story so far, hope it isn't on break for too long as I really wanna see the end. You are one of the authors left on this website that can grib me! Hope to see more soon. Keep up the amazing work x
4/10/2016 c20 
1Foxluna
Well whenever u can update this story, please let me know. Im enjoying this very much! Seireitei can go to hell for all i care. After all Ichigo has done for them all, they leave him to face Aizen alone? All they are are heartless monsters with absolutely no heart or soul. Those who were once friends of his in Seireitei i guess no longer are nd havent been in over 2 maybe 3 millennia if they EVER were in the first place. Bastards all of them.
1FoxlunaWell whenever u can update this story, please let me know. Im enjoying this very much! Seireitei can go to hell for all i care. After all Ichigo has done for them all, they leave him to face Aizen alone? All they are are heartless monsters with absolutely no heart or soul. Those who were once friends of his in Seireitei i guess no longer are nd havent been in over 2 maybe 3 millennia if they EVER were in the first place. Bastards all of them.
4/7/2016 c20 hotta
mind blowing! always find ichigo loving strawberries so adorable! Hoping Grimmjow will find a way to not let Ichigo be killedloving and enjoying this all the way! looking so forward to the rest update, and best of luck for your exams;)!
mind blowing! always find ichigo loving strawberries so adorable! Hoping Grimmjow will find a way to not let Ichigo be killedloving and enjoying this all the way! looking so forward to the rest update, and best of luck for your exams;)!
4/7/2016 c16 hotta
wow really can't imagine grimmjow crying.. I love how everything flows so naturally Herelove the mud creatures as men description XD and I suddenly feel hungry for honey cake..where to get one mmmmm
wow really can't imagine grimmjow crying.. I love how everything flows so naturally Herelove the mud creatures as men description XD and I suddenly feel hungry for honey cake..where to get one mmmmm
4/7/2016 c13 hotta
it gets so exciting just waiting for the moment girmmjow makes his huge realization that his God has always been in front of his face 0.o
it gets so exciting just waiting for the moment girmmjow makes his huge realization that his God has always been in front of his face 0.o
4/7/2016 c12 hotta
I'm enjoying this story soooo much, how did I ever miss this out really.. love love love..
I'm enjoying this story soooo much, how did I ever miss this out really.. love love love..
4/7/2016 c8 hotta
now this is what I call a real story. totally in love with this. your writing is phenomenal
now this is what I call a real story. totally in love with this. your writing is phenomenal
4/7/2016 c5 hotta
Wow this story is simply amazing beyond words. Full of originality and I'm totally enamored
Wow this story is simply amazing beyond words. Full of originality and I'm totally enamored
4/6/2016 c20 1Doggyband
That was... not where I expected ot to go when I startdd reading... not at all... my thoughts pales in comparison to what was actually written. Damn. You're good.
From a friendly little fan~
1DoggybandThat was... not where I expected ot to go when I startdd reading... not at all... my thoughts pales in comparison to what was actually written. Damn. You're good.
From a friendly little fan~
4/3/2016 c20 StrongPoison
Hello there. How did you even manage to write this chapter? For the first time ever I've cried while reading smut. Tears started flowing during Shiro and Grimmjow's dialogue and just continued, big and fat, till I reached the end of the chapter. I thought I'd drown. I nearly calmed down at one point because, well, smutty goodies XD, but then Ichigo started kissing Grimmjow, and roused him from his "activities" and he remembered that... Ichigo is not safe. And ... Well, now I can say that It's the first time ever I've cried while reviwing. But... Lets get down to the real review. First of all... I really did think that the story was completed and Ichigo would be left alone to enjoy his happily ever after with Grimmjow, it really surprised me that it was not so but still made me happy. Especially beacuse the plot is still really canon like, which is amazing, you are using the same contex of Rukia's missed execution and it feels like I'm reading bleach when it still was worth reading. Grimmjow... Is intense. Wow I love him. In most fics he gets changed and simplified because he's hard to write about while respecting his harshness and brutality and fierce nature. And it's most difficult to break him down to tears like you did. You made him ready to submit and beg. For he is useless in a fight against gods and he cannot do but plead and beg and I'm crying again. I loved how he interacted with Shiro, I loved how he wanted him to know his name, and then from that prideful moment he fell into despair and madness and even got physical with a god, an extremely dangerous one at that. I rally liked this transaction, from king and lover to a god, to insignificant human whose life caused the downfall of the most perfect god. It was beautiful. I also loved his struggle to lay hand on Ichigo. When he fell into prayer at his feet I was... Touched. I really empathize with him a lot and I could feel his... "Guilt" and ... Well the right term would be Ubris, still, I think you managed yet again to convey the characters feeling in the best way possible. Ichigo is perfection. When Shiro spoke about him, when Grimmjow thought he was beautiful, it swelled my heart to see his innocent side when he tugged Grimmjow's arm not to let him go and then revealed not to know what his lover was up to with his fingers and the oil. It reminded me of when he was the Ryoka and we had his pov and he was the sweetest thing ever. It is hard to see him as the brightest star and the cute ryoka at the same time, and for Grimmjow must have been even more appalling and... Amusing I guess. I seriously like your Ichigo more than any character ever existed. Seriously, that you wrote about him like you did means the world to me. Then, Shiro. My baby. I love him. I'm not coherent enough to comment on him, I'm sorry. To have such an insight on him was precious, to read about his feeling was touching. To know about his silent grief and his enormus pride and respect and love for Ichigo made my day. Seriously. I don't know what to say. Oh, yeah, I really liked how you repeated "forgotten" three times to introduce the expanation of Ichigo's fate. It set a nice rithm to a very importat moment. I'll end this with saying that If you need a break you need to take a break, sometimes there is nothing else to do but change your pace. I too am soon to be crushed by some very important exams and I felt somewhat guilty just to have read this chapter so I can relate to you I think. To write while half your heart is scared shitless of the surrounding reality must be tiring. I'm amazed you managed to write something so long and meaningful. I hope you'll find this review entertaining. Thanks for the hard work.
Hello there. How did you even manage to write this chapter? For the first time ever I've cried while reading smut. Tears started flowing during Shiro and Grimmjow's dialogue and just continued, big and fat, till I reached the end of the chapter. I thought I'd drown. I nearly calmed down at one point because, well, smutty goodies XD, but then Ichigo started kissing Grimmjow, and roused him from his "activities" and he remembered that... Ichigo is not safe. And ... Well, now I can say that It's the first time ever I've cried while reviwing. But... Lets get down to the real review. First of all... I really did think that the story was completed and Ichigo would be left alone to enjoy his happily ever after with Grimmjow, it really surprised me that it was not so but still made me happy. Especially beacuse the plot is still really canon like, which is amazing, you are using the same contex of Rukia's missed execution and it feels like I'm reading bleach when it still was worth reading. Grimmjow... Is intense. Wow I love him. In most fics he gets changed and simplified because he's hard to write about while respecting his harshness and brutality and fierce nature. And it's most difficult to break him down to tears like you did. You made him ready to submit and beg. For he is useless in a fight against gods and he cannot do but plead and beg and I'm crying again. I loved how he interacted with Shiro, I loved how he wanted him to know his name, and then from that prideful moment he fell into despair and madness and even got physical with a god, an extremely dangerous one at that. I rally liked this transaction, from king and lover to a god, to insignificant human whose life caused the downfall of the most perfect god. It was beautiful. I also loved his struggle to lay hand on Ichigo. When he fell into prayer at his feet I was... Touched. I really empathize with him a lot and I could feel his... "Guilt" and ... Well the right term would be Ubris, still, I think you managed yet again to convey the characters feeling in the best way possible. Ichigo is perfection. When Shiro spoke about him, when Grimmjow thought he was beautiful, it swelled my heart to see his innocent side when he tugged Grimmjow's arm not to let him go and then revealed not to know what his lover was up to with his fingers and the oil. It reminded me of when he was the Ryoka and we had his pov and he was the sweetest thing ever. It is hard to see him as the brightest star and the cute ryoka at the same time, and for Grimmjow must have been even more appalling and... Amusing I guess. I seriously like your Ichigo more than any character ever existed. Seriously, that you wrote about him like you did means the world to me. Then, Shiro. My baby. I love him. I'm not coherent enough to comment on him, I'm sorry. To have such an insight on him was precious, to read about his feeling was touching. To know about his silent grief and his enormus pride and respect and love for Ichigo made my day. Seriously. I don't know what to say. Oh, yeah, I really liked how you repeated "forgotten" three times to introduce the expanation of Ichigo's fate. It set a nice rithm to a very importat moment. I'll end this with saying that If you need a break you need to take a break, sometimes there is nothing else to do but change your pace. I too am soon to be crushed by some very important exams and I felt somewhat guilty just to have read this chapter so I can relate to you I think. To write while half your heart is scared shitless of the surrounding reality must be tiring. I'm amazed you managed to write something so long and meaningful. I hope you'll find this review entertaining. Thanks for the hard work.
4/3/2016 c20 3jowchi
COPPER that was absolutely amazing! Time and time again, you never fail to rise to and beyond all my expectations. I'm always so excited to see the email that tells me you've updated. Even the sex was gorgeous - Ichi's adorable, but so is Grimm, amidst both of their irresistable hotness. The scene with Shiro (and all thoughout afterwards) was simply heartbreaking. PLEASE DON'T TAKE ICHI. Is a happy ending too much to ask for? As always, all the love and much appreciation. I will eagerly await the next update.
xx Jou
3jowchiCOPPER that was absolutely amazing! Time and time again, you never fail to rise to and beyond all my expectations. I'm always so excited to see the email that tells me you've updated. Even the sex was gorgeous - Ichi's adorable, but so is Grimm, amidst both of their irresistable hotness. The scene with Shiro (and all thoughout afterwards) was simply heartbreaking. PLEASE DON'T TAKE ICHI. Is a happy ending too much to ask for? As always, all the love and much appreciation. I will eagerly await the next update.
xx Jou