for The Stars Rained Down Like Embers4/2/2016 c20 Sumeri
well I have no words
for this perfection 3 so just imagine i'm showering you with praises because my brain is empty of all words except jesus christ
WOW
well I have no words
for this perfection 3 so just imagine i'm showering you with praises because my brain is empty of all words except jesus christ
WOW
4/1/2016 c20 
9TempestJewel
I hope your exam goes well and I hope you return to this story. It is one of the best I have ever read and wouldn't be surprised if you could pursue original story writing. Thank you for at least letting us know of your absense!
9TempestJewelI hope your exam goes well and I hope you return to this story. It is one of the best I have ever read and wouldn't be surprised if you could pursue original story writing. Thank you for at least letting us know of your absense!
4/1/2016 c20 28Leukonoe
That was very nice chapter (I think I was drooling in some time), but... well anything good doesn't last long. Anyway I'm still in love with this story :)
I understand perfectly that you little tired of Bleach, I have the same problem. Like there is nothing new to write about. But I still don't find something with so great charakters like Bleach. SnK has potential, but it' still not enough for me.
Now I can be a liitle harsh, but argument about little feedback it's for me hmmm little immature. Your story has 500 comments, aren't you to greedy? Take in consideration few thing. First, it's rather normal with laters chapters goes fewer comment. Most reader leave one comment or two and don't leave for any chapter. Second, not every reader is native english and even if they can read, not every feel good enough to write something more than "great story, I like it" or something like this. And how many times you can write the same comment. One is enough. I too don't leave comment for every chapter, 'couse is troublesome to write something constructive in language you are not mastered. But that all doesn't mean automatically that it's something wrong with story (as it goes for me it's going better and better).
What I want to say, you have to be more confident with your skills. And if these 500 comments didn't make you feel that way, a don't know what could. And everytime you start writing you would end like this.
Of course it's only my opinion and you have all rights to disagree but know, that i hadn't intent to offend you :)
Hope you will find you muse again, or write another great story :)
28LeukonoeThat was very nice chapter (I think I was drooling in some time), but... well anything good doesn't last long. Anyway I'm still in love with this story :)
I understand perfectly that you little tired of Bleach, I have the same problem. Like there is nothing new to write about. But I still don't find something with so great charakters like Bleach. SnK has potential, but it' still not enough for me.
Now I can be a liitle harsh, but argument about little feedback it's for me hmmm little immature. Your story has 500 comments, aren't you to greedy? Take in consideration few thing. First, it's rather normal with laters chapters goes fewer comment. Most reader leave one comment or two and don't leave for any chapter. Second, not every reader is native english and even if they can read, not every feel good enough to write something more than "great story, I like it" or something like this. And how many times you can write the same comment. One is enough. I too don't leave comment for every chapter, 'couse is troublesome to write something constructive in language you are not mastered. But that all doesn't mean automatically that it's something wrong with story (as it goes for me it's going better and better).
What I want to say, you have to be more confident with your skills. And if these 500 comments didn't make you feel that way, a don't know what could. And everytime you start writing you would end like this.
Of course it's only my opinion and you have all rights to disagree but know, that i hadn't intent to offend you :)
Hope you will find you muse again, or write another great story :)
4/1/2016 c20 3Setia Prenn
Hey hey it's me again! I read your note on tumblr, and despite you not feeling the story anymore it was still nice to read! And smut is a nice bonus ofcourse. You still managed to keep the writing style the same while basically writing porn, thats rlly well done honestly.
It's okay if you want to put this story on hold, you ave good reasons. I'm also not that much into the Bleach fandom anymore. I still love it, but it has been so abandoned lately, it's a shame. But if you ever decide to finish it, I'll gladly read it ofcourse 3!
3Setia PrennHey hey it's me again! I read your note on tumblr, and despite you not feeling the story anymore it was still nice to read! And smut is a nice bonus ofcourse. You still managed to keep the writing style the same while basically writing porn, thats rlly well done honestly.
It's okay if you want to put this story on hold, you ave good reasons. I'm also not that much into the Bleach fandom anymore. I still love it, but it has been so abandoned lately, it's a shame. But if you ever decide to finish it, I'll gladly read it ofcourse 3!
4/1/2016 c20 Grimminette
Oh my God I love this chapter so much ! They are absolutly too cute.I wish them a happy end they really deserve it !
I hope your muse will come back to you and wish you to pass your exam to be less stressed !
I'll wait for your next chapter don't worry !
(Sorry if I made some mistakes )
Oh my God I love this chapter so much ! They are absolutly too cute.I wish them a happy end they really deserve it !
I hope your muse will come back to you and wish you to pass your exam to be less stressed !
I'll wait for your next chapter don't worry !
(Sorry if I made some mistakes )
3/31/2016 c20 28ArisuAmiChan
My reviews can not compare to how you write, in all honesty. I'm just at a loss for words at how beautiful this chapter is!
The self control Grommjow used, the very naughty fantasy he had of Ichigo and himself!
I had a feeling Shiro was jealous of Grimmjow! Why else would he fall after Ichigo? But poor Shiro... He's just so, so sad...
And Seireitei! Bah! Their laws are unjust! And unneeded!
Out of curiosity, how does one pronounce shendyt? I've been mulling over that and hear it as shen-deet in my head since first seeing the word.
Anyway, back on track! I want to hug Shiro, of course but obviously he wouldn't enjoy that too much! And poor Grimmjow... How will he protect Ichigo from the wrath of many Gods?
Would he rally the members of the court against them? Or would he just give up?
I get the feeling he won't give up so easily. I'm going to stick to my rally theory for now, though and hope that's what is in store!
Also, I can't help but feel like you'll end up throwing a strange plot twist in such as one or the other being in a coma and that this was all a dream... Maybe that's just me, though from all the things I've read in the past...
But again: Another beautifully written chapter, Copper! The flow was gorgeous, as always and the way you write is simply amazing! I can't wait for the next update, so please take as much time as you need to yourself, okay? Don't push yourself, please!
28ArisuAmiChanMy reviews can not compare to how you write, in all honesty. I'm just at a loss for words at how beautiful this chapter is!
The self control Grommjow used, the very naughty fantasy he had of Ichigo and himself!
I had a feeling Shiro was jealous of Grimmjow! Why else would he fall after Ichigo? But poor Shiro... He's just so, so sad...
And Seireitei! Bah! Their laws are unjust! And unneeded!
Out of curiosity, how does one pronounce shendyt? I've been mulling over that and hear it as shen-deet in my head since first seeing the word.
Anyway, back on track! I want to hug Shiro, of course but obviously he wouldn't enjoy that too much! And poor Grimmjow... How will he protect Ichigo from the wrath of many Gods?
Would he rally the members of the court against them? Or would he just give up?
I get the feeling he won't give up so easily. I'm going to stick to my rally theory for now, though and hope that's what is in store!
Also, I can't help but feel like you'll end up throwing a strange plot twist in such as one or the other being in a coma and that this was all a dream... Maybe that's just me, though from all the things I've read in the past...
But again: Another beautifully written chapter, Copper! The flow was gorgeous, as always and the way you write is simply amazing! I can't wait for the next update, so please take as much time as you need to yourself, okay? Don't push yourself, please!
3/31/2016 c20 3Angelina08
It was beautiful...
But I feel really sad that Ichigo will be executed...
By other Gods...
Please let him live... with Grimmjow...
3Angelina08It was beautiful...
But I feel really sad that Ichigo will be executed...
By other Gods...
Please let him live... with Grimmjow...
3/31/2016 c20 65honeyMellon
Yesss! They finally get some action! I was torn between going "ouch ouch ouch" for Ichigo and going "come on already!" for our beloved warlord. It looks like their path ahead isn't going to get any easier, damn. But I'm confident that they will make it through the end, by sheer will and stubbornness if nothing else!
Keep up the good work as usual! :) Another chapter well done.
65honeyMellonYesss! They finally get some action! I was torn between going "ouch ouch ouch" for Ichigo and going "come on already!" for our beloved warlord. It looks like their path ahead isn't going to get any easier, damn. But I'm confident that they will make it through the end, by sheer will and stubbornness if nothing else!
Keep up the good work as usual! :) Another chapter well done.
3/31/2016 c20 Anon
YES! I'm so happy for this update! I love this... but aHHH I'm sad. Ichigo can't die.
Also, Shiro is such a little shit I love him.
YES! I'm so happy for this update! I love this... but aHHH I'm sad. Ichigo can't die.
Also, Shiro is such a little shit I love him.
3/28/2016 c19 Guest
I ADOREEEE THIS STORY. i love it to pieces.
there is only one singular thing that bothers me and that's grimmjow's possessiveness. like it's ubderstandable and everythjng, but that boy needs to learn how to chill. XD
Again, wonderful story!
I ADOREEEE THIS STORY. i love it to pieces.
there is only one singular thing that bothers me and that's grimmjow's possessiveness. like it's ubderstandable and everythjng, but that boy needs to learn how to chill. XD
Again, wonderful story!
2/29/2016 c19 Guest
poetic and well written
poetic and well written