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2/10/2016 c1 4GrownUp90s
I know it's been a while, but I hope you continue this! You've got Cox's voice nailed down perfectly, and you've struck the right balance between lovability and misanthropy that makes our Perry so unique :)

That bit about Cox being put off by JD's more adult form showed Perry's soft side, and I'm interested to see what Grown-up JD will be like going forward.

And of course The Devil himself, Bob Kelso! He didn't make an appearance in this chapter, but I'd love to see what you plan on doing with him. There's not enough Kelso/Cox interaction in this fandom...maybe writers can't write humor? But that bit about 'Jumpy McScrubs,' makes me think that you can!

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