for Broken2/28/2019 c7 
2Gifty
Beautiful!
You really caught the sense of each character! Thank you for that lovely story :-)
2GiftyBeautiful!
You really caught the sense of each character! Thank you for that lovely story :-)
1/18/2019 c3 guardian of grayskull
I, think they are trying to find some answers, about what had happened during the 30 days mess-for Tom, realizing that Captain Proton was a sign of his naivete, before the Monean incident, and Voyager. And, Katerina turns to Leonardo for advice, i can still remember that particular character in the series, his advice does sound great! He, knows the pain she carried well i enjoyed this chapter!
I, think they are trying to find some answers, about what had happened during the 30 days mess-for Tom, realizing that Captain Proton was a sign of his naivete, before the Monean incident, and Voyager. And, Katerina turns to Leonardo for advice, i can still remember that particular character in the series, his advice does sound great! He, knows the pain she carried well i enjoyed this chapter!
1/18/2019 c2 guardian of grayskull
Um, first of all i want to correct my previous mistake, in my other review- it was 30 days not 90 days sorry 'bout that! Okay, i think i know why Tom pointed out those "isolated incidents" i think if there was ever any sore subject in the friendship between these two, was Tom's father. He'd pointed out what Chakotay, Tuvok and even Seven had done, and they'd got a slap on the wrist while he'd made a mistake and got 30 days in the brig, i think to him that was a betrayal, that hurt him- a lot, just a theory and i have read this story a few times and well, i respect how much effort you'd put into this story! Until the next review!
Um, first of all i want to correct my previous mistake, in my other review- it was 30 days not 90 days sorry 'bout that! Okay, i think i know why Tom pointed out those "isolated incidents" i think if there was ever any sore subject in the friendship between these two, was Tom's father. He'd pointed out what Chakotay, Tuvok and even Seven had done, and they'd got a slap on the wrist while he'd made a mistake and got 30 days in the brig, i think to him that was a betrayal, that hurt him- a lot, just a theory and i have read this story a few times and well, i respect how much effort you'd put into this story! Until the next review!
1/18/2019 c1 guardian of grayskull
I, don't know why i always liked this pairing in star trek voyager fan stories. Maybe i always hoped that they'd wind up together, well still this paring is my personal favorite! And this story takes place after "90 days" well until the next review!
I, don't know why i always liked this pairing in star trek voyager fan stories. Maybe i always hoped that they'd wind up together, well still this paring is my personal favorite! And this story takes place after "90 days" well until the next review!
3/9/2018 c1 8Treadstone17
One of the more poignant Kathryn/Tom stories I've read. I've always felt Janeway and Paris were the more natural pairing than K/C or T/P. Their personalities are very similar and they compliment each other nicely.
Well done.
8Treadstone17One of the more poignant Kathryn/Tom stories I've read. I've always felt Janeway and Paris were the more natural pairing than K/C or T/P. Their personalities are very similar and they compliment each other nicely.
Well done.
12/23/2014 c4 me
Hey there! I really like your story so far. but the bit with breaking into sunshine and a missile is just so very good I had to congratulate on that. I love it!
Hey there! I really like your story so far. but the bit with breaking into sunshine and a missile is just so very good I had to congratulate on that. I love it!
12/23/2014 c7 Guest
Great story. Kathryn and Tom are my second favorite couple after J/C. I'll look forward to other stories featuring J/P.
Great story. Kathryn and Tom are my second favorite couple after J/C. I'll look forward to other stories featuring J/P.
12/23/2014 c7 Juddysbuddy
I really enjoyed this story. Great to have a new J/P story. Thanks for writing!
I really enjoyed this story. Great to have a new J/P story. Thanks for writing!
12/21/2014 c7 testpast
Thank you for such a wonderful story. I can see it is one possibility how Tom can break free and move on. You also touched on StarTrek equivalent of politically incorrect comments of "as happy as a man and volatile, moody half-Klingon can be". The writers of Voyager had a special talent of writing themselves into corners, so thanks to you and others, I can read interesting, fun J/P stories here.
Happy Holidays.
Thank you for such a wonderful story. I can see it is one possibility how Tom can break free and move on. You also touched on StarTrek equivalent of politically incorrect comments of "as happy as a man and volatile, moody half-Klingon can be". The writers of Voyager had a special talent of writing themselves into corners, so thanks to you and others, I can read interesting, fun J/P stories here.
Happy Holidays.