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6/8/2017 c1 Guest
Look. This is good and all, but you don't seem to have any originality. I don't FEEL your writing. The writing itself is professional and drveloped, but sorta emotionless. I can't really grasp Asuna's pain. She cries a little, and describe the emptiness. But you don't seem to go in depth. Imma have to give this one a 4/10.
3/29/2017 c1 Guest
my favourite one shot ever i loved the plot even if it was shot i almost cried thank you for uploading this!
1/9/2015 c1 8InvisableTarget
i love this story but i feel like there should be more. like what she did after and how Suguha and MIdori took it
12/30/2014 c1 OTAgaming
Omg, i know this is kinda late but, please move on, yu deserve better , this is kinda sad but the story is nice, but sad... cheer up brother!

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