12/22/2015 c36 sleepywolf47
next time you should do an insert with uryuu x rukia and uryuus brother oc x orihime
next time you should do an insert with uryuu x rukia and uryuus brother oc x orihime
7/6/2015 c13 loveless
the story is kinda good and unique but...
GIRLS...they always ruin the whole story..just when i finally found a male oc..i dont have anything bout girl..u just suck on writing bout them
the story is kinda good and unique but...
GIRLS...they always ruin the whole story..just when i finally found a male oc..i dont have anything bout girl..u just suck on writing bout them
2/28/2015 c31 Chilly292
You don't need to be sorry about how long this chapter took because it was totally worth it! I loved how Haineko (no idea if I spelled that right although I just read the name like 5 minutes ago) and Kuro were fighting over Hyornimaru (I definitely know that was spelled incorrectly). It added the slight humor needed in such a serious situation. I can't wait for your next chapter!
You don't need to be sorry about how long this chapter took because it was totally worth it! I loved how Haineko (no idea if I spelled that right although I just read the name like 5 minutes ago) and Kuro were fighting over Hyornimaru (I definitely know that was spelled incorrectly). It added the slight humor needed in such a serious situation. I can't wait for your next chapter!
2/24/2015 c30 1Chilly292
Wow thanks for mentioning me at the beginning! And here's another review for you to write faster! I thought it was so cute (idk if that's the correct word but whatever) when Jushiro had that "proud fatherly grin." It was kinda like one of those teary moments when you want to put your hand over your heart and sob with a large smile. Well maybe not at that moment exactly but still. And the other thing that i liked was when Toshiro calls Ash "the Microwave." I just thought that was funny. :)
Wow thanks for mentioning me at the beginning! And here's another review for you to write faster! I thought it was so cute (idk if that's the correct word but whatever) when Jushiro had that "proud fatherly grin." It was kinda like one of those teary moments when you want to put your hand over your heart and sob with a large smile. Well maybe not at that moment exactly but still. And the other thing that i liked was when Toshiro calls Ash "the Microwave." I just thought that was funny. :)
2/24/2015 c30 NightlyRowenTree
that be cool to see toshiro and ash's zanpakuto's interacting with each other and this has been really cool keep up the good work
that be cool to see toshiro and ash's zanpakuto's interacting with each other and this has been really cool keep up the good work
2/23/2015 c29 Chilly292
You did a great job with this chapter, as usual! Please please please Hyorinmaru be okay! And please for Ash to defeat Kuro Enkei! Keep up with the great work!
You did a great job with this chapter, as usual! Please please please Hyorinmaru be okay! And please for Ash to defeat Kuro Enkei! Keep up with the great work!
2/4/2015 c26 Chilly292
This is a fantastic chapter! Please write more; I want to know what happens to Ash next!
This is a fantastic chapter! Please write more; I want to know what happens to Ash next!
1/27/2015 c3 QueenKarin13
Heh, if his smile grew ten times larger it would come off his face and he'd look like the cheshire cat or Shinji. Funny mental image there.
Heh, if his smile grew ten times larger it would come off his face and he'd look like the cheshire cat or Shinji. Funny mental image there.
1/10/2015 c19 LittleAngel01385
I wanna send you the picture, but I have two problems. One is I don't know how to send it to you. Second, it will take several weeks to a month for me to start a new drawing now.
I wanna send you the picture, but I have two problems. One is I don't know how to send it to you. Second, it will take several weeks to a month for me to start a new drawing now.
1/4/2015 c15 LittleAngel01385
This doesn't actually shock me that he's dead because I know some people who read manga and one of them told me that he dies. It was just a spoiler since I don't read the Bleach manga. Except in the manga, he doesn't die yet.
This doesn't actually shock me that he's dead because I know some people who read manga and one of them told me that he dies. It was just a spoiler since I don't read the Bleach manga. Except in the manga, he doesn't die yet.