for The Losers (Rewrite)
35/8/2024 c56 beentoowrong
That is really good work! Thank you very much. And I liked so much the characters you picked, I think Kiba and Choji are rarely used, what a pity. I hope the sequel will be continued
That is really good work! Thank you very much. And I liked so much the characters you picked, I think Kiba and Choji are rarely used, what a pity. I hope the sequel will be continued
3/8/2024 c24 Warsaw504
I'm not sure how I feel with this story. I adore the dynamic you made with Narutos friends and what you have done to expand the abilities of most of them. but and big shocker here the bashing if probably the worst part of this story and it really hurts whats otherwise a really good story. Making Sasuke, Ino, Sakura, and Kakashi antagonist is fine but making them totally incompetent takes sooo much away from this story. They don't all need redemption arcs or anything but you don't respect the characters at all and its honestly tiring to read and it apparently gets worse so I think im gonna bow out. Ill say this its a solid read if you can get over the bashing.
I'm not sure how I feel with this story. I adore the dynamic you made with Narutos friends and what you have done to expand the abilities of most of them. but and big shocker here the bashing if probably the worst part of this story and it really hurts whats otherwise a really good story. Making Sasuke, Ino, Sakura, and Kakashi antagonist is fine but making them totally incompetent takes sooo much away from this story. They don't all need redemption arcs or anything but you don't respect the characters at all and its honestly tiring to read and it apparently gets worse so I think im gonna bow out. Ill say this its a solid read if you can get over the bashing.
2/25/2024 c2 Guest
I get that Naruto is bit of pervert but he is 7 for gods sake why would he distracted by Hana it would make sense if he was 11
I get that Naruto is bit of pervert but he is 7 for gods sake why would he distracted by Hana it would make sense if he was 11
2/25/2024 c1 Guest
Haven’t read it yet but the losers is an interesting title especially since I don’t think shikamaru or kiba were losers in the academy I am super curious on how this is gonna turn
Haven’t read it yet but the losers is an interesting title especially since I don’t think shikamaru or kiba were losers in the academy I am super curious on how this is gonna turn