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9/16/2020 c1 RukiaMoon14
that was so cute .
1/11/2018 c1 RukiYuki
Soooooo sweet
5/14/2016 c1 Meryu-chan
AaaWwww~~~It's so cute! *_*
9/13/2015 c1 18JoTerry
This is nice. Sequel? :D
6/26/2015 c1 KICK UR ASS
LOVED IT! hope u write many more,if u dont, d hollows will get ...
6/14/2015 c1 timc0212
I like one-shot AU stories like this - decent writing, nice concept, to the point, and no crazy characterisations.
1/16/2015 c1 rukiapeahberry
Love itttttt!. I can say for sure that this is one of my top 5 Favorite Fanfics!.
12/24/2014 c1 Guest
KYAAAAAAAAAA AAW
12/24/2014 c1 14Azalea Airys
Awesome!
12/22/2014 c1 blissbeat
The way you writing this story was so cute... I cant stop smiling while reading it... Hopefully it will continue...
12/22/2014 c1 hopelessromantic
*singing* lucky I'm in love with my best friend...
12/22/2014 c1 27hunterofcomedy
It was sweet. Very fluffy, which I'm not personally a huge fan of, but it was well done and I enjoyed the sweetness of it. The only thing I would kind consider distracting would be the exposition on Rukia's background. It's not really needed because it never comes up again afterward. If her status or brother came up again in the story, it would be founded but here, it's more of a distraction until we get to the main event.

Just saying that Byakuya had to leave and she went to Ichigo's is enough. You could make a little scene about her remembering meeting Ichigo and fitting in a bit of her past into there while she's heading to his house but even then it needs to be subtle and light. Don't get me wrong, the background story wasn't bad, just not needed since it didn't impact the story much. We get that best friends sometimes fall in love and so, the background isn't needed for it and can be condensed.

Anyway, I did love the story and think you did a fantastic job of it. Great job!
12/22/2014 c1 5rushiii
I knew it would end up like that! XD

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