12/29/2014 c3 14MooseTalk
Tessaring is so freaking awesome Mouse! (Daila? Well she's just adorable.) Tessaring is so graceful and epic. I wonder how old she is now..
Lol, I love how you were like, "She quite fancied Frodo." True that sister! :))
Can't wait until the next chapter or new stories you have planned. You're really going to Town with these stories! (No pun intended.)
Tessaring is so freaking awesome Mouse! (Daila? Well she's just adorable.) Tessaring is so graceful and epic. I wonder how old she is now..
Lol, I love how you were like, "She quite fancied Frodo." True that sister! :))
Can't wait until the next chapter or new stories you have planned. You're really going to Town with these stories! (No pun intended.)
12/23/2014 c1 Guest
I really like this so far, Mouse! Great job on the back story, and I like how you describe things too. :D Hope you continue this story!
I really like this so far, Mouse! Great job on the back story, and I like how you describe things too. :D Hope you continue this story!
12/23/2014 c1 Lana
Please do continue the story! It kinda reminds me of my best friend and i. Its well written, though you might want to check the chapters before you pist them because there are a few mistakes. For instance when you describe Daila. You said 'she had was a young, attractive hobbit' when it should have been 'she was a young attractive hobbit'. Otherwise it's very good.
Please do continue the story! It kinda reminds me of my best friend and i. Its well written, though you might want to check the chapters before you pist them because there are a few mistakes. For instance when you describe Daila. You said 'she had was a young, attractive hobbit' when it should have been 'she was a young attractive hobbit'. Otherwise it's very good.