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8/14/2017 c1 fenixrojo36
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3/29/2015 c1 Jyuubi no Naruto
Excellent chapter
12/31/2014 c1 SPark681
Hmm wonder what powers Naruto has and when they'll awaken anyways keep up the great work!
12/24/2014 c1 Guest
Sooooo good please just maybe give naruto an inner hollow like in bleach with the masks and this will be officially perfect his sacred hear is the kyuubi and its totally OP but over all MAKE HIS SACRED GEAR THE KYUUBI/BIJUU AND REALLY OP (quick translation over powered) MY NUMBER ONE HOPE IS THAT YOU'LL MAKE LONG CHAPTERS ANDLIKE 30 OF THEM.
12/24/2014 c1 a certain reading fan
well let's see where this goes!
12/24/2014 c1 Legend3881
Very generic start when compared to the other stories in this section. Will need to read some more chapters before some constructive criticism can be made.
12/24/2014 c1 Mzr90
Seems interesting but did see some grammar and spelling mistakes: unsure if I'll read the rest since I have a feeling you'll follow the norm: Naruto in a peerage and falling for Rias.
12/24/2014 c1 kage88
interesting

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