for Sympathetic Properties11/18 c3 Boomshanka
Thanks for not including a spree of Harry's shopping, and not describing each and every pants, shirts, robes, and underwear he buys. I also happen to get fed up of shopping... real life or reading about it.
But the shoemaker and his elves were fun to read!
Thanks for not including a spree of Harry's shopping, and not describing each and every pants, shirts, robes, and underwear he buys. I also happen to get fed up of shopping... real life or reading about it.
But the shoemaker and his elves were fun to read!
10/10 c24 
2HetaPhiPuffPrincess
Ok i love u and i love this story, but the minute details the over long inner monologues that border on information overload. Is too much. We are half way through this book and still have two weeks till the start of the second term. This is a glacial pace for one. For two no one needs this much information. We know all these characters we get thwir morals and some of the stuff you put in is repetitive thinking and idk if thats just how u think and therfore write or if its intentional for some characters. The in depth analysis of wvery kinute feeling or thought is way too much . This is fan fiction, not some in depth character analysis . Like get to the point , i dont even know what the plot is of this story because these so many sub plots going on. I can barely keep the information straight cuz theres so much of it. Next fan fic just write the story. U dont need character fluff we are reading this cuz we love HP and want anorher variation of the stories. But all this is like reading Hogwarts a History on top of in depth analysis of what each founder was thinking and doing during the building of hogwarts and thats just unnecessary.
2HetaPhiPuffPrincessOk i love u and i love this story, but the minute details the over long inner monologues that border on information overload. Is too much. We are half way through this book and still have two weeks till the start of the second term. This is a glacial pace for one. For two no one needs this much information. We know all these characters we get thwir morals and some of the stuff you put in is repetitive thinking and idk if thats just how u think and therfore write or if its intentional for some characters. The in depth analysis of wvery kinute feeling or thought is way too much . This is fan fiction, not some in depth character analysis . Like get to the point , i dont even know what the plot is of this story because these so many sub plots going on. I can barely keep the information straight cuz theres so much of it. Next fan fic just write the story. U dont need character fluff we are reading this cuz we love HP and want anorher variation of the stories. But all this is like reading Hogwarts a History on top of in depth analysis of what each founder was thinking and doing during the building of hogwarts and thats just unnecessary.
10/9 c8 HetaPhiPuffPrincess
Oh Harry u silver tounged devil you! Im blushing just reading it . This is adorable!
Oh Harry u silver tounged devil you! Im blushing just reading it . This is adorable!
9/11 c12 18YamiYugiYuki
It’s official I adore Barchoke and Litchfield. They’re both hilarious. This is very well written but still a little hard to understand even with text-to-speech but that may just be me at the moment and have nothing to do with your writing. I’m not very well so that’s probably not helping.
18YamiYugiYukiIt’s official I adore Barchoke and Litchfield. They’re both hilarious. This is very well written but still a little hard to understand even with text-to-speech but that may just be me at the moment and have nothing to do with your writing. I’m not very well so that’s probably not helping.
9/11 c5 YamiYugiYuki
Apologies, I recently discovered I was logged in on my phone on a different account. Barcoke and Litchfield are hilarious. Their conversations are a little hard to keep up with but that might just be me.
Apologies, I recently discovered I was logged in on my phone on a different account. Barcoke and Litchfield are hilarious. Their conversations are a little hard to keep up with but that might just be me.
8/18 c12 Closed-Account-8264
It’s official I adore Barchoke and Litchfield. They’re both hilarious. This is very well written but still a little hard to understand even with text-to-speech but that may just be me at the moment and have nothing to do with your writing. I’m not very well so that’s probably not helping.
It’s official I adore Barchoke and Litchfield. They’re both hilarious. This is very well written but still a little hard to understand even with text-to-speech but that may just be me at the moment and have nothing to do with your writing. I’m not very well so that’s probably not helping.
8/18 c5 Closed-Account-8264
Barcoke and Litchfield are hilarious. Their conversations are a little hard to keep up with but that might just be me.
Barcoke and Litchfield are hilarious. Their conversations are a little hard to keep up with but that might just be me.
8/13 c19 mrmayortheiv
This goblin/Gringotts arc just refuses to end. Chapter 19/46 in a 630k word story, and barely anything has happened. I'm done.
This goblin/Gringotts arc just refuses to end. Chapter 19/46 in a 630k word story, and barely anything has happened. I'm done.
8/11 c14 7jada951
nice for MR. granger to be different from his wife and not the ex-military he is in some story. Not slamming those stories at all, just saying it's nice to get another view of a canon character.
7jada951nice for MR. granger to be different from his wife and not the ex-military he is in some story. Not slamming those stories at all, just saying it's nice to get another view of a canon character.
8/11 c11 jada951
First things I have read positive about Molly in a long time.
Not only kicking Dumbles out, but in telling Ginny to leave harry alone.
First things I have read positive about Molly in a long time.
Not only kicking Dumbles out, but in telling Ginny to leave harry alone.
8/11 c10 jada951
Just because Dumbles sees unicorns farting rainbows for the greater good,
makes him no less a beastie - a delusional monster.
Just because Dumbles sees unicorns farting rainbows for the greater good,
makes him no less a beastie - a delusional monster.
7/29 c46 121Kimberly T
This is a thoroughly enjoyable story!
I rather like Harry and Hermione's mutual anxiety about saying or doing the wrong thing and failing the other's expectations, putting their budding relationship at risk. But I also appreciate how you're avoiding the HP trope of Ron-bashing, letting him stay as their friend even as he also tries to figure out the new dynamic.
Ginny... *shakes head* that girl really, *really* needs a therapist. Which is exactly what Diary Tom Riddle isn't.
For all that he's clearly kind-hearted, your Dumbledore had actually been rather horrifying at times, with his blind faith in The Greater Good having led him to make disastrous decisions. On the other hand, your Lucius Malfoy is every inch a villain, and quite clearly the éminence grise of the wizarding world.
But there's one point that puzzles me, and I don't know if I missed a crucial bit of information in my reading or if it hasn't been explained yet: What happened eleven or more years ago to put Hogwarts in such dire straits financially? If the lack of money from Harry's vault is making such a huge difference in their budget that the story has indicated so far, then how did they get along without it before Oct. 31, 1981?
121Kimberly TThis is a thoroughly enjoyable story!
I rather like Harry and Hermione's mutual anxiety about saying or doing the wrong thing and failing the other's expectations, putting their budding relationship at risk. But I also appreciate how you're avoiding the HP trope of Ron-bashing, letting him stay as their friend even as he also tries to figure out the new dynamic.
Ginny... *shakes head* that girl really, *really* needs a therapist. Which is exactly what Diary Tom Riddle isn't.
For all that he's clearly kind-hearted, your Dumbledore had actually been rather horrifying at times, with his blind faith in The Greater Good having led him to make disastrous decisions. On the other hand, your Lucius Malfoy is every inch a villain, and quite clearly the éminence grise of the wizarding world.
But there's one point that puzzles me, and I don't know if I missed a crucial bit of information in my reading or if it hasn't been explained yet: What happened eleven or more years ago to put Hogwarts in such dire straits financially? If the lack of money from Harry's vault is making such a huge difference in their budget that the story has indicated so far, then how did they get along without it before Oct. 31, 1981?
6/27 c12 MuffinRamsey
This entire story has been fantastic to read and SO well written for both character development and plot. The powwow in Dumbledore’s office and associated reactions as well as the conversation that Snape had with him, were extraordinary. Those moments in his office really got me. Incredible!
This entire story has been fantastic to read and SO well written for both character development and plot. The powwow in Dumbledore’s office and associated reactions as well as the conversation that Snape had with him, were extraordinary. Those moments in his office really got me. Incredible!
6/5 c9 Guest
Performing live on Privet Drive
"Bill Weasley and the Goblins"
Performing live on Privet Drive
"Bill Weasley and the Goblins"