for Bellatrix's second chance3/15 c213 
1MissPotter97
James just can't shut up and stop acting like an immature 6 year old can he?
No
Hmm, I wonder if Grindelwald and Voldemort will manage to break the wards...eventually. I hope that doesn’t happen. By the way, a good chappie as usual.
Miss P
1MissPotter97James just can't shut up and stop acting like an immature 6 year old can he?
No
Hmm, I wonder if Grindelwald and Voldemort will manage to break the wards...eventually. I hope that doesn’t happen. By the way, a good chappie as usual.
Miss P
2/27 c5 Guest
Fo
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2/24 c212 6Yaw6113
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and enjoyed it a lot.
6Yaw6113Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and enjoyed it a lot.
2/16 c25 sonofthechaos
Great plot awful writing please find a beta reader to fix all the mistakes and I may read then but I cannot continue with this as it is
Great plot awful writing please find a beta reader to fix all the mistakes and I may read then but I cannot continue with this as it is
2/6 c211 1MissPotter97
Greyback's death was really the highlight of the chapter. He is the most disgusting character in the series in my opinion, especially considering how he is described in HbP and DH. YUK! Now I'm just thinking about that scene at the astronomy tower (right before Dumbledore's death in HbP… Disgusting! Anyway good chapter as usual. I'm looking forward to reading the next one and how the rescue of Bella and Susan goes. Hmm… wonder what happened to the death eaters there? they are acting a bit sus. for once i agree with voldie lol.
1MissPotter97Greyback's death was really the highlight of the chapter. He is the most disgusting character in the series in my opinion, especially considering how he is described in HbP and DH. YUK! Now I'm just thinking about that scene at the astronomy tower (right before Dumbledore's death in HbP… Disgusting! Anyway good chapter as usual. I'm looking forward to reading the next one and how the rescue of Bella and Susan goes. Hmm… wonder what happened to the death eaters there? they are acting a bit sus. for once i agree with voldie lol.
2/4 c210 2Yaw613
Please write the next chapter already.? Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. I am sorry if I am being rude or annoying you with my reviews; I don’t mean to be rude or annoy you with my reviews; I just really enjoy your story a lot.
2Yaw613Please write the next chapter already.? Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. I am sorry if I am being rude or annoying you with my reviews; I don’t mean to be rude or annoy you with my reviews; I just really enjoy your story a lot.
1/27 c1 Guest
It's not 'sidewalk' in Britain. 'Pavement' is the general term.
It's not 'sidewalk' in Britain. 'Pavement' is the general term.
1/17 c7 Randy Hartley1
The sugar content of Bella Smith meeting Hagrid for the first timemistaking him for a mountain makes the dental appointment from this morning pointless. its freaking adorable, because of how well written the chapters are. each scene is just as well-structured as the original book without sacrificing the emotional impact of the characters as you get to know and understand them from the intro. I am in need of a essay on the amount of high quality writing.
TEN OUT OF TEN. Very Well Written, Keep Up The Great Work.
The sugar content of Bella Smith meeting Hagrid for the first timemistaking him for a mountain makes the dental appointment from this morning pointless. its freaking adorable, because of how well written the chapters are. each scene is just as well-structured as the original book without sacrificing the emotional impact of the characters as you get to know and understand them from the intro. I am in need of a essay on the amount of high quality writing.
TEN OUT OF TEN. Very Well Written, Keep Up The Great Work.
1/8 c202 Guest
I have no sympathy for Rufus' death. He died of his own stupidity. Okay, it's not his fault that the Ministry wasn't already prepared, it's Fudge's, Malfoy's and Grindelwald's fault too. But Rufus did nothing but drink in his office and trash the friends who are a thousand times better than what the Ministry has been/done. So, no big loss there… at least not for me. But I can understand that having a head sent in a box must be disturbing. And disgusting too.
And by the way, I like the concept of everyone showing their memories in the last chapter. It was really interesting and gave perspective.
~Miss P
I have no sympathy for Rufus' death. He died of his own stupidity. Okay, it's not his fault that the Ministry wasn't already prepared, it's Fudge's, Malfoy's and Grindelwald's fault too. But Rufus did nothing but drink in his office and trash the friends who are a thousand times better than what the Ministry has been/done. So, no big loss there… at least not for me. But I can understand that having a head sent in a box must be disturbing. And disgusting too.
And by the way, I like the concept of everyone showing their memories in the last chapter. It was really interesting and gave perspective.
~Miss P
1/8 c202 I have no sympat
I have no sympathy for Rufus' death. He died of his own stupidity. Okay, it's not his fault that the Ministry wasn't already prepared, it's Fudge's, Malfoy's and Grindelwald's fault too. But Rufus did nothing but drink in his office and trash the friends who are a thousand times better than what the Ministry has been/done. So, no big loss there… at least not for me. But I can understand that having a head sent in a box must be disturbing. And disgusting too.
I have no sympathy for Rufus' death. He died of his own stupidity. Okay, it's not his fault that the Ministry wasn't already prepared, it's Fudge's, Malfoy's and Grindelwald's fault too. But Rufus did nothing but drink in his office and trash the friends who are a thousand times better than what the Ministry has been/done. So, no big loss there… at least not for me. But I can understand that having a head sent in a box must be disturbing. And disgusting too.
1/8 c202 1MissPotter97
I have no sympathy for Rufus' death. He died of his own stupidity. Okay, it's not his fault that the Ministry wasn't already prepared, it's Fudge's, Malfoy's and Grindelwald's fault too. But Rufus did nothing but drink in his office and trash the friends who are a thousand times better than what the Ministry has been/done. So, no big loss there… at least not for me. But I can understand that having a head sent in a box must be disturbing. And disgusting And by the way, I like the concept of everyone showing their memories in the last chapter. It was really interesting and gave perspective
Keep up your incredible work, Winma.
1MissPotter97I have no sympathy for Rufus' death. He died of his own stupidity. Okay, it's not his fault that the Ministry wasn't already prepared, it's Fudge's, Malfoy's and Grindelwald's fault too. But Rufus did nothing but drink in his office and trash the friends who are a thousand times better than what the Ministry has been/done. So, no big loss there… at least not for me. But I can understand that having a head sent in a box must be disturbing. And disgusting And by the way, I like the concept of everyone showing their memories in the last chapter. It was really interesting and gave perspective
Keep up your incredible work, Winma.
1/6 c200 MissPotter97
Yes, and there we see again the same old mindset that Dumbles has instilled, the presumption from when Lily and Alice joined the order of the phoenix. But I still think they are stupid here. Seriously, anyone with common sense knows that you can't use light spells like stupefy or disarm the opponent. But no, some still haven't got it. You would think they would know better and have learned from the last war. It just makes me so irritated. And don't even get me started on them refusing to hug their children's own children. I'm glad the other adults are sensible anyway. PS: I just realized I wrote Dumbles when it was actually Grindelwald. Wrote it wrong but I still haven't gotten used to the idea yet haha.
Miss P
Yes, and there we see again the same old mindset that Dumbles has instilled, the presumption from when Lily and Alice joined the order of the phoenix. But I still think they are stupid here. Seriously, anyone with common sense knows that you can't use light spells like stupefy or disarm the opponent. But no, some still haven't got it. You would think they would know better and have learned from the last war. It just makes me so irritated. And don't even get me started on them refusing to hug their children's own children. I'm glad the other adults are sensible anyway. PS: I just realized I wrote Dumbles when it was actually Grindelwald. Wrote it wrong but I still haven't gotten used to the idea yet haha.
Miss P