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11/8/2015 c18 rebecca taylor
I LOVE THIS STORY!
10/29/2015 c12 1jfkkennedy
good story. But you really need to work on your spelling and grammar. You make the same mistakes over and over. No offense, but i don't think english is your main language or your very young...not a insult just a observation. "toughed" instead of "thought" is a big difference in words and definition.
10/26/2015 c17 1Fletchling
I can't wait until you update again! Please hurry up and finish the next chapter...and possibly the rest of the chapters... just a thought.
6/18/2015 c16 amber.lincoln3
Pleases more!
6/18/2015 c1 Doom Marine 54
Oh look another retarded Lucy fangirl who writes the exact same fucking story as every other fantard on here where Natsu acts like an out of character jerk and Laxus is put on a pedastal because the author is a shallow fangirl who cares more about looks than personality. Let me break this down for you princess, the reason this stories been up for a year and has only a handful of reviews is because no one wants to read a story about Team Natsu being bashed and Lucy becoming a mary-sue. Only the other morons who keep reposting this same stupid fanfic like this garbage. You want people to like your stories? Be fucking original and don't just copy what everyone else does just because it seems popular.
6/13/2015 c15 amber.lincoln3
Please more!
5/23/2015 c14 11mythmagykfae
Cool Story, update soon (:
5/18/2015 c1 Lexi Scarlet
HOW DARE THEY! SHE WAS FAMILY, HOW COULD THEY FORGET HER AND THEN JUST THROW HER AWAY? That being said, great story.
5/15/2015 c14 amber.lincoln3
Please more!
4/15/2015 c13 Guest
love it make more
3/9/2015 c13 2natsugrayloki22
laxus pls beat the s**t out f him

Thanks for the update author San

Pls update more
3/9/2015 c13 kerippi
Yay! U go kick some ass Laxus :D
1/31/2015 c10 natsugrayloki22
Update pls
1/31/2015 c10 PrismRootStarlight
Awesome! Looking forward to the next chappie!:)
1/18/2015 c9 PrismRootStarlight
Looking forward to the next chappie!:)
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