for Legend of Korra -- Unity1/1/2015 c1 dainlord
I really like your style of writing. The ony thing that bothers me in the story is how fast they agree to marry. They never even dated before...it's a bit like Mako/Korra in Season 1, how they go from almost nothing to "I love you" and here it's even faster. I just don't think they are people who rush into things (Korra was in Season 1, but she has changed since then), excpecially Asami.
I really like your style of writing. The ony thing that bothers me in the story is how fast they agree to marry. They never even dated before...it's a bit like Mako/Korra in Season 1, how they go from almost nothing to "I love you" and here it's even faster. I just don't think they are people who rush into things (Korra was in Season 1, but she has changed since then), excpecially Asami.