for The Mistake6/6/2019 c9 Guest
So, great story and all, but as a native Korean, I'd like to point out some things you might want to change. Now, I don't really know who's the older sibling, but I saw that Minho cals her noona and she calls Minho oppa. See, the awkward thing here is in my country in South Korea, when a sibling or a person is older than someone, the younger one calls the older one noona or oppa. The older one usually calls the younger one by their name. One of them must be older than the other - nobody calls their younger sibling noona or oppa, that's just completelhy awkward, weird and WRONG. If you want to use Korean when you write fanfiction, I strongly advise you have a careful looks at the basics first.
So, great story and all, but as a native Korean, I'd like to point out some things you might want to change. Now, I don't really know who's the older sibling, but I saw that Minho cals her noona and she calls Minho oppa. See, the awkward thing here is in my country in South Korea, when a sibling or a person is older than someone, the younger one calls the older one noona or oppa. The older one usually calls the younger one by their name. One of them must be older than the other - nobody calls their younger sibling noona or oppa, that's just completelhy awkward, weird and WRONG. If you want to use Korean when you write fanfiction, I strongly advise you have a careful looks at the basics first.
7/18/2016 c19 
2Peppei
interestingg! i havent read a maze runner fan fic with a plot like this. i like how you made her work with wicked, and we get to see the things she's forced to do.
2Peppeiinterestingg! i havent read a maze runner fan fic with a plot like this. i like how you made her work with wicked, and we get to see the things she's forced to do.
4/27/2015 c19 fiercetiger333
PLEASE update soon! I'm gonna die if you don't
PLEASE update soon! I'm gonna die if you don't
4/24/2015 c19 fiercetiger333
amazing!please update soon
amazing!please update soon
4/19/2015 c19 Guest
Hey don't do this to me I'm had waiting for the next chapter like a loooong time! Please submit! Please! I love this and I love you!
Hey don't do this to me I'm had waiting for the next chapter like a loooong time! Please submit! Please! I love this and I love you!
4/9/2015 c19 Bipolar Queen
This is so... ASFJDLHGLDLAKSHFDHSQKA! I MEAN, AWESOME! ugh. I just can't stop myself from reading it over and over again. Why didn't i thought of that? HAHAHA. This is sooooooooo great! :D xx wish you'll update sooner
This is so... ASFJDLHGLDLAKSHFDHSQKA! I MEAN, AWESOME! ugh. I just can't stop myself from reading it over and over again. Why didn't i thought of that? HAHAHA. This is sooooooooo great! :D xx wish you'll update sooner
4/8/2015 c19 Guest
There are no happy endings. Endings are the saddest part.
That's so sad! THE FEELS!
There are no happy endings. Endings are the saddest part.
That's so sad! THE FEELS!
4/6/2015 c19 9AsgardianGrizzly
Ohmergawd. (see what I did there) so I read the doctor who conversation and u once again made an unintentional reference! The endings are the saddest part. In Doctor Who there's an episode where the doctor explains that he always rips out the last page of books he reads because he hates endings. XD loved the chapter! I thought it was super good! Can't wait for more! :D
9AsgardianGrizzlyOhmergawd. (see what I did there) so I read the doctor who conversation and u once again made an unintentional reference! The endings are the saddest part. In Doctor Who there's an episode where the doctor explains that he always rips out the last page of books he reads because he hates endings. XD loved the chapter! I thought it was super good! Can't wait for more! :D
4/6/2015 c18 bookgirl
This is great, but please update I can't take all of these clifies!
This is great, but please update I can't take all of these clifies!
3/31/2015 c18 EmmaLovesTmr
Bruuuuhhhhhhhh WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME WHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHY PM ME PLEASE
Bruuuuhhhhhhhh WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME WHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHY PM ME PLEASE
3/31/2015 c18 2Stardustinmyeyes12
Dick, was nit intentionally put there but now that I think about it I do not regret a thing.
2Stardustinmyeyes12Dick, was nit intentionally put there but now that I think about it I do not regret a thing.
3/31/2015 c18 9AsgardianGrizzly
I actually thought that was a pretty good chapter. It was kinda cool to see only a little detail and some rough edges here and there. I liked the twist that Estelle is with Jorge and Brenda. Nicely done. :)
9AsgardianGrizzlyI actually thought that was a pretty good chapter. It was kinda cool to see only a little detail and some rough edges here and there. I liked the twist that Estelle is with Jorge and Brenda. Nicely done. :)