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1/14/2015 c1 10Enyo-of-Chaos
It's amazing how quickly rejection can sober someone up. I really liked the transition from happy, bubbly, drunk Elphie into wounded, passionate Elphaba. I pity Fiyero's testicles, something tells me that would hurt... a lot. That opening line was brilliant and wryly humorous; a massive build up to her being drunk. I laughed. The juxtaposition of her not remembering the love and remembering the hurt was also a highly appreciated subtlety.
12/30/2014 c1 Guest
fiyero redEEM YOURSELF
12/30/2014 c1 Gffgfhgfhfr
Aww, I love guys and dolls, that would actually make a good Wicked fanfic, and I applaud Fiyero for restraining himself. Good boy! Adorable and fluffy, and I love happiness no matter how this story ended because they all live happily ever after, it's Oz.

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