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7/7/2015 c12 46Mysterie1985
be interesting to see what Sandy does with the other. can't wait for the next chapter :)
5/11/2015 c11 Mysterie1985
*hugs* don't fight it Jack...
4/4/2015 c10 Mysterie1985
poor Jack...
3/29/2015 c9 Mysterie1985
good chapter. as for the whole "claws paws thing" perhaps "clawed foreleg/back leg" would fit better for future descriptions since most reptiles (which dragons are a type of) only have legs and not arms like mammals of today do. just a suggestion to help you out, how you describe it is up to you (it is your story after all).
3/28/2015 c8 Mysterie1985
great chapter... but um... wyverns AREN'T dragons... they're a cousin actually. unlike dragons who can command all of the elements, wyverns are limited to earth, fire & ice.

*tries to protect the Guardians against the ice wyvern, knows can't beat it but hopes a wall of sand will save them from its icy blast*
3/27/2015 c7 Mysterie1985
*hugs Jack, trying to break him out of this*
3/25/2015 c6 Mysterie1985
T-T Jack...

*Shadow smirks* about time!

Shadow!

What? I was getting lonely and those jerks deserve it!
3/23/2015 c5 Mysterie1985
[really? why the heck were you standing in FRONT of Pitch then? why not circle around back in the game?]

poor Jack... *just wants to hug him, but needs to fix all the wounds first...*
3/21/2015 c4 Mysterie1985
Jack! Oh no... *winces*

*laughs* Good one Jakul!

shut up Shadow.

Tsk, tsk... you shouldn't be rude... You can't get rid of me anymore than Jack can be rid of Jakul after all... hope to see you soon "sweety"! *blows a kiss at Jakul then winks*

*facepalm* oh gods no... just... no...
3/6/2015 c1 Mysterie1985
hmmmm... well it is an interesting twist... havin' Pitch force Jack into something... still, this kinda spoils the end of the first one so it shoulda been left in the wings until you'd finished it - just my thoughts.

still good though.
12/31/2014 c1 1YasminSnowflakeFaith
I like it. 'Til next time

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